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'unplanned Destiny'

the stars stun my cloudy eyes they never looked so striking a staircase to the unknown unplanned destiny
©12022012

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/12/2012 4:52:00 PM
WOW! An open sky poem! Leaves the reader to dream. Very nice, Wilma! Best wishes, Caroline.
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Date: 2/12/2012 4:48:00 PM
I think Michael summed it up, this is a beautiful piece of art. I love that you capture the mystery of the heavens with a touch of humility. Lovely poetry Mrs. Wilma, just lovely, thanks for sharing.
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Date: 2/12/2012 3:41:00 PM
You throw words on paper like an artist throws paint on a canvas. Stunning piece my dear sweet Wilma. Luv n hugs darling. Michael
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Date: 2/12/2012 3:12:00 PM
this is just beautiful Wilma..love,Deb
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Date: 2/12/2012 1:45:00 PM
Beautiful lines, Wilma! Thanks for your kind comments. I hope you are having a wonderful weekend. Blessings, Rhonda
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