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'unplanned Destiny'

the stars stun my cloudy eyes
they never looked so striking
a staircase to the unknown
unplanned destiny


©12022012

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Caroline Cécile Delacroix

February 12, 2012 at 4:52 PM

WOW! An open sky poem! Leaves the reader to dream. Very nice, Wilma! Best wishes, Caroline.

Tim B

February 12, 2012 at 4:48 PM

I think Michael summed it up, this is a beautiful piece of art. I love that you capture the mystery of the heavens with a touch of humility. Lovely poetry Mrs. Wilma, just lovely, thanks for sharing.