Unpacking

As much as I don’t like to pack,
You’d think that after coming back
I’d simply do things in reverse,
But emptying is almost worse.

The dirty stuff goes in the wash
But since I overpack, well, gosh!
I have to sort and put away
The unworns for another day.

They’re wrinkled, though, so should I wait
To iron at a later date
Or hang them up with crease and fold?
Procrastination’s taken hold.

My suitcase sits for several days
And it will take a few delays
Until at last I zip it closed,
And order’s once again imposed.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Johnson Avatar
December 12, 2013 at 1:50 PM
Not unlike my laundry, I tend to fall asleep. A bag or two that I plop down just simply have to keep. Maybe I wont do anything until I get my rest. But getting at it right away you know is always best. Peace. :)
Dietrich Avatar
December 11, 2013 at 3:34 PM
Ilene, an interesting topic for poem. I LOVE the unpacklng part . It goes very fast for me!!!
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 11, 2013 at 9:24 AM
Love it and so so true xx
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