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Unofficial Winter

UNOFFICIAL WINTER

two days after storm
brown leaves cleave to branches, like
a flurry of crows
seasons size each other up
icy stare of snow from oak

12/10/2017

Copyright © Kim Rodrigues | Year Posted 2017

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James Edward Lee Sr.

December 14, 2017 at 6:28 PM

I love this so festive and visual.. Great write, thanks for your vision, James

December 14, 2017 at 8:25 PM

Thanks so much, James!

December 11, 2017 at 7:33 AM

Vivid. Love that last line the most. Great closing.

December 11, 2017 at 3:32 PM

Thank you, Rhoda!

December 10, 2017 at 9:44 AM

love the imagery here Kim a little gem of a poem:-) hugs jan xx

December 11, 2017 at 3:33 PM

Thanks so much, Jan! xx

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

December 10, 2017 at 9:33 AM

Winter, official or unofficial,is great for us people in the tropics.Love Kim.

December 11, 2017 at 3:34 PM

Thank you, Rajat! Blessings!

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