Notes About The Poem
              Sometimes, it feels like we are -

     gathered together in one place,
  yet going in opposite directions

      ________________________

Unnoticed

. . The fragile thoughts of a poet bloom,
even when they seem to go

Unnoticed
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Authors Note:
~ Never be afraid to let your words soar ~

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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May Avatar
January 24, 2024 at 7:44 PM
Lovely write Brandy, Good advice in the Notes, Hugs
Nicole Avatar
January 25, 2024 at 7:31 PM
Thank you, Joseph. Your words always caress the clouds. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Toney Avatar
July 5, 2018 at 10:27 AM
Good to know that the number of views our poems receive does not determine their true value. That makes this poem a fav. :)
Nicole Avatar
July 5, 2018 at 1:06 PM
You are right Mark. You understand this write perfectly. Thank you for your kind words. For you to favorite this, it truly humbles me. ~ Brandy
One Avatar
July 3, 2018 at 1:25 PM
Such is life...
Nicole Avatar
July 3, 2018 at 6:39 PM
True, such is life. However, there is always a positive around the negative. Your thoughts matter. Thank you Silent One. ~ Brandy
Mcmanes Avatar
July 3, 2018 at 10:27 AM
Enjoyed the clear and concise words which fit the image perfectly. Nicely composed. RD
Nicole Avatar
July 3, 2018 at 6:38 PM
Thank you RD. I appreciate your thoughts. ~ Brandy
Man Avatar
July 3, 2018 at 12:04 AM
Brandy.. this is just magnificent! I love it!!
Nicole Avatar
July 3, 2018 at 8:43 AM
Thank you. May your words always reach the sky. ~ Brandy
Smith Avatar
July 2, 2018 at 2:20 PM
Wise words Brandy
Nicole Avatar
July 2, 2018 at 4:09 PM
Thank you Tim. I appreciate you reading my poetry. ~ Brandy
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