Kim Rodrigues Poet Alliteration

Unnerved

UNNERVED

a fresh grave, gravelly dug,
collar gathered and put upon.

the doghouse, below the gloam,
godforsaken with a gaping hole.

guard of gray-glass, at midnight,
hardly hinders gathering ghosts.

unnerved fear grips my sleep,
gangly bedroom curtain grieves.


9/2/2017
Contest 335 Any Form Contest

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Winged Warrior September 21, 2017 at 7:57 AM An ambient Alliteration style verse Kim...well done my friend...^WW^ Kim Rodrigues September 21, 2017 at 8:31 AM Thanks so much, WW! Based on truth.

Vijay Pandit September 20, 2017 at 7:16 PM Feels sad, but intriguing--best wishes for a win! Kim Rodrigues September 20, 2017 at 7:56 PM Thanks, Vijay!

Andrea Dietrich September 20, 2017 at 7:00 PM I enjoyed its rhythmic quality in addition to the alliteration, Kim. Really nice. Kim Rodrigues September 20, 2017 at 7:04 PM Thanks, Andrea!