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Unnerved

UNNERVED a fresh grave, gravelly dug, collar gathered and put upon. the doghouse, below the gloam, godforsaken with a gaping hole. guard of gray-glass, at midnight, hardly hinders gathering ghosts. unnerved fear grips my sleep, gangly bedroom curtain grieves. 9/2/2017 Contest 335 Any Form Contest

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Date: 9/21/2017 7:57:00 AM
An ambient Alliteration style verse Kim...well done my friend...^WW^
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/21/2017 8:31:00 AM
Thanks so much, WW! Based on truth.
Date: 9/20/2017 7:16:00 PM
Feels sad, but intriguing--best wishes for a win!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/20/2017 7:56:00 PM
Thanks, Vijay!
Date: 9/20/2017 7:00:00 PM
I enjoyed its rhythmic quality in addition to the alliteration, Kim. Really nice.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/20/2017 7:04:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea!

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