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Unnecessary Truth

Without your permission, I will come into your life and omit traces of my most modest essence. Then without warning, I will withdraw myself from your domain, leaving you to obsess over my unorthodox disposition that has been unraveling since first introduction

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Michael Benkhen

Date: 9/21/2010 3:15:00 PM

Nicely done.

James Fraser

Date: 9/18/2010 9:38:00 AM

Interesting poetry Heidi >> James

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/17/2010 7:55:00 AM

I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Heidi. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you may enter.If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 9/17/2010 4:20:00 AM

intriguing write!!

David Smalling

Date: 9/17/2010 4:18:00 AM

Heidi, there is so much talent here, this poem tells a genius of words. Welcome to poetrysoup, you will have many friends, and I shall be honored to be numbered among them.