Unnatural Sight

It is completely dark.
There nothing to be seen in the night.
Then with a crack of light,
that unnatural sight,
of seeing clearly in the night.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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February 6, 2015 at 8:17 AM
A nice description of a lightning strike. Thanks, and welcome back to poetry soup, Ezra. It's been a year since we heard from you.
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February 25, 2015 at 4:44 PM
thank you for the warm welcome i didn't even realize it had been that long ago since i last posted... But i promise to show more this year.
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January 26, 2015 at 5:32 PM
Love the twist of this poem.
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January 31, 2015 at 5:55 PM
Thank you so much. I was inspired during a terrible lightning storm where the lightning light up at least 100 yards around me.
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