Unnatural

Artificial heart
     not genuine

   Artificial intelligence
     uproots the divine

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Regina Elliott

October 28, 2023 at 3:43 PM

Hi Gershon, I agree. AI is a scary realm to me.

Terry Flood

October 24, 2023 at 4:20 PM

Boy do I detest AI. I find myself suspicious of every new name on soup… which is entirely unfair and I try to put it to one side… mostly, successfully… mostly!

Gershon Wolf

October 24, 2023 at 8:06 PM

Heh-heh. I'm with you there, Terry. I don't like anything about it, including Mr. Gupta (spelling?), the smarmy elitist who first introduced it to most people with two examples of placing an order, one at a restaurant, one at a hairdresser. Of course, he and AI received thunderous applause for doing something (fairly poorly, btw), that any 10 year-old girl could do much better with a couple minutes of preparation. Ewwwwwwwwwwww! Thanks gw

Paula Goldsmith

October 24, 2023 at 12:48 PM

Your "Unnatural" write tells a story in a few words. So True... Have a blessed day....................

Gershon Wolf

October 24, 2023 at 8:08 PM

A story in a few words from me, a big-blabbermouth. Interesting tidbit right there. Thanks, Paula. ~ Garrulous Gershon

Kim Rodrigues

October 24, 2023 at 8:25 AM

Well said! AI has no passion, nor intensity, no compassion. No heart, even if given the scarecrow’s because it has no capacity- it flies off without Dorothy - can’t flip her off nor wave goodbye…it just is neutral.

John Lawless

October 24, 2023 at 5:30 AM

I worked with a gentleman who often commented "that one's educated way beyond the scope of his/her intelligence".

Unnatural

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