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repost from 2011 prompted by Mohan's contest theme

I see beyond today, come closer.. hear what I say; I see beyond your mask, trust me.. it's all I ever ask; I see beyond your pain, be healed.. And live again; I see beyond your cry, hold my hand.. I'll dry your eye; I see beyond it all, turn to me... And walk tall.

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/8/2020 12:55:00 PM

Thanks Brian. Being a Christian played a big role when I wrote my book.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/8/2020 12:54:00 PM

Thanks Brian. Being a Christian played a big role when I wrote my book.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/8/2020 8:03:00 AM

For me, this is one of your best.

Brian Strand
Date: 9/8/2020 8:14:00 AM

You have checked out quite a selection date wise Richard from my poetic development.This repost from 2011 shows a little of my move to an open style since those early days.The Holy Spirit is my usual prompt for my Christian verse and moments of awareness for my imagist output just seem to happen as is so tonspeak.Your comments are much appreciated.Stay creative

Susan Ashley

Date: 7/18/2020 12:16:00 PM

A moving spiritual beauty, Brian. Serenity to embrace and to look forward to. Warmest wishes always.. ~ Susan

Brian Strand
Date: 7/18/2020 1:08:00 PM

Thanks,have a good weekend Susan