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Today I look at a world filled with so much wickedness
written in thirteen syllables count

Highlighted by black Friday unlucky number for some history
when reading about this war seeing pictures of innocent people burned
by chemical weapons used we know by the main polluter of this planet
Filled with evil will destroying land that is now completely poisoned
wildlife or nothing can live in these zones Gulf war syndrome

33 per cent of soldiers have been poisoned

godless entities to do such an act of violence driven by elite bodies
dawning eyes rape and killings on a daily scale spiralling
the sun is rising over our earth watching mans uncaring attitude
we need to wash our feet of this darkness that purges our planet

Unlucky For Some Heart's Possessed With War and Hate Blind

Separating the wheat from chaff magic prisoner
From the dust of darkness you are born from ash remains 
having walked a crooked pathway inside regrets 
buried under sparkling silver lining clouds lights up 
Lightening strikes hitting earthy notes trembling voices 
falling thunder echoes from dying embers of pain 
a star spangled vision igniting flames, peaces torch 
I can feel it in your eyes as oceans mist over 
Salted inside a triangle of lie holds apex 
from the hidden truth centre eye exposed one corner
Three you are where hidden facts remain tortured hotly
our souls know where the fifty shades of grey shape shadows
nothing comes under smoke is ever white underneath

abortionbetrayalbullyingconflictdeathverse

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Charlie Smith

January 15, 2017 at 9:08 AM

Good work, great notes...

Dorian Petersen Potter

January 14, 2017 at 6:39 PM

Hi Liam!:))Wow! Wow!This is a very powerful, outstanding poem you've written here my dearest friend Liam.All so beautifully penned with truth n' caring.Yes,very sadly the world we live in these days is completely in chaos, Liam.All the very sad, terrible events, injustices everywhere, make my heart n' soul very sad.Prayers are very powerful, we need pray more for all Liam.The Bible is very clear about all these n' more in the future.Another very beautiful sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.Excellent piece!Awesome!A true glowing gem!Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7+++ ++!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're okay in everything.Please keep positive n' very strong.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers,Liam.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely day!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^

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