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Unlovable

Hyperventilating on the bathroom floor
Nobody hears
Nobody cares
If I were to just stop breathing 
He wouldn’t be there
I call for help
But not even a breathless me 
Would make him come running
And that’s what being unlovable is like

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 5/8/2019 8:55:00 AM
Powerful piece reflecting how some people are simply unloving and do not have a heart. Time to move on... there are so many worthwhile people who are both loving and lovable waiting for us out there.
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