For Dilly Dally's unlocking the answers contest
In the beginning quasars burst forth, primal stars born Ionised light suffused, a cosmic primeval dawn Later man came along, looked west, awestruck by the sun One morn an eclipse came to pass, blotting out his sun Man huddled together, fear of the unknown was born They surmised god was in the sky, controlling the dawn Intelligence was naive, as sense was yet to dawn Eons passed, man grew quite clever, unlocking the sun Now splits atoms in labs, with AI primed to be born We had no choice but to be born, wake up one dawn, feel god and the sun
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