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Forgive me god for I have sin I kissed a man that isn't him And when my mouth recieved his tongue My heart yelled out that this is wrong My mind reacted with my hands to push away this man of sand; sand he was for he left me heavy and my breathing became unsteady I try to push, but I was drowned By his nonsence words and pleasuring sounds his eyes were pleading to let him reside and let him place his weakness inside But I sneered at him I have a love and pleaded him don't make me shove I'm sorry that I passed your kiss So you could think I won't resist But my act was done to get rid of the thought of how it would've been, if you left me unlocked...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/11/2010 9:29:00 AM
What wonderful poetry I am reading today and so diverse. I have not read a bad poem yet today. I am enjoying reading each and everyone from old poets and new poets alike. Lots of amazing contest entries also. Thank you for sharing yours with us today Jessica. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/10/2010 8:10:00 PM
deep write,, enjoyed this one..P.D.
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Date: 8/10/2010 4:22:00 PM
So luv this piece Jessica.. great emotion in every line and wonderful rhyme as well.. most creative and enjoyable read . we all relate ..we all have been tempted.. with luv..
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Date: 8/10/2010 3:57:00 PM
Interesting thoughts.. that would be a bad situation to find oneself...Glad that it is just a write..Sara
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