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June 20, 2025, entered Line Gauthier's Bite Sized Poem contest 116, placed 2nd

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Always saying "I" and "me,"
egotists make poor company.
Altruists have found the key, 
unlocking smiles with "you" and "we."

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Vanya Evangeline

Date: 7/7/2025 4:20:00 AM

This is a wisdom we need now more than ever, Janice. A lot of self-help these days are teaching people to love themselves and setting boundaries (to keep others out!). Some of them are probably necessary, but for the most part it seems like the culture is promoting self-centredness. Congrats on the very well-deserved win.

Elaine George

Date: 10/4/2020 4:56:00 AM

Words of wisdom, dear Janice.

Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/4/2020 5:06:00 PM

Thanks so much, Elaine. Janice

Rico Leffanta

Date: 10/3/2020 11:51:00 AM

Well said! Something for the Trumps to ponder over the weekend! Aloha! Rico

Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/4/2020 5:06:00 PM

Thanks, Rico. Janice

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 10/2/2020 6:30:00 PM

Hello Janice … I also notice that there is no ‘I’ in YOU, WE, or US. Wise words indeed Janice - Lindsay

Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/3/2020 11:43:00 AM

Thank you so much, Lindsay. Janice

Daniel Turner

Date: 10/2/2020 4:30:00 PM

This one is a keeper Janice. It is my opinion, that the most valuable gift one can give is their time. It is common for folks to donate material items but when they donate their time it becomes an investment. Are you enjoying the cooler weather? I hope you are well:)

Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/3/2020 11:45:00 AM

Yes, giving of time speaks volumes. I am loving this weather. Thanks so much, Danny. Hope you too are well. Janice