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Though clusters of stardust explode like fire-glow, I wail. And with your tomb resting a hundred miles Beyond our unlit abode... there is no warm room For me in every rosy nightfall, sparkling – As my tear-blots and very veins still contain you. 8/25/2019 Writing Challenge 3, August 2019 - Five Lines - Sponsor - Dear Heart- Wiishkobi Ode

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Date: 9/4/2019 9:28:00 AM
Extreme...deep... I loved it... Ann
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Date: 8/31/2019 10:16:00 PM
Nette, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this deeply emotional Verse, and your image is great too ~
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Date: 8/29/2019 3:58:00 AM
- Back with congratulations, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/29/2019 12:55:00 AM
Congratulations, nette, on your win. Touched the soul.
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Date: 8/27/2019 9:49:00 PM
Touching poem here. Thanks for your kind words and good luck in the contest! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 8/26/2019 8:47:00 AM
Short, intense, and on point. This astounding work riles of loneliness. My pleasure to join your past contest!
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Date: 8/26/2019 8:15:00 AM
Emotions so well expressed.. a great write, as always.
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Date: 8/26/2019 7:38:00 AM
Such a sad and longing piece Nette, but like usual, beautifully done. Best wishes in the contest
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Date: 8/26/2019 6:30:00 AM
A very emotional piece Nette, Tom
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Date: 8/26/2019 4:56:00 AM
- A deeply sad poem, Nette - Luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/26/2019 3:42:00 AM
Intense emotions in an unlit room... I like the style...
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