Nette Onclaud Poet Verse

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Unlit Room

Though clusters of stardust explode like fire-glow,
        I wail. And with your tomb resting a hundred miles 
    Beyond our unlit abode... there is no warm room
 For me in every rosy nightfall, sparkling –
As my tear-blots and very veins still contain you.



8/25/2019
Writing Challenge 3, August 2019 - Five Lines -
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Ann Foster September 4, 2019 at 9:28 AM Extreme...deep... I loved it... Ann

Constance La France August 31, 2019 at 10:16 PM Nette, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this deeply emotional Verse, and your image is great too ~

Anne-Lise Andresen August 29, 2019 at 3:58 AM - Back with congratulations, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Subimal Sinha-Roy August 29, 2019 at 12:55 AM Congratulations, nette, on your win. Touched the soul.

Matthew Anish August 27, 2019 at 9:49 PM Touching poem here. Thanks for your kind words and good luck in the contest! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Juaneco Torrente August 26, 2019 at 8:47 AM Short, intense, and on point. This astounding work riles of loneliness. My pleasure to join your past contest!

Vijay Pandit August 26, 2019 at 8:15 AM Emotions so well expressed.. a great write, as always.

Chris Green August 26, 2019 at 7:38 AM Such a sad and longing piece Nette, but like usual, beautifully done. Best wishes in the contest

Tom Cunningham August 26, 2019 at 6:30 AM A very emotional piece Nette, Tom

Anne-Lise Andresen August 26, 2019 at 4:56 AM - A deeply sad poem, Nette - Luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Arturo Michael August 26, 2019 at 3:42 AM Intense emotions in an unlit room... I like the style...