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Unlikely Friends

Friend, find solace next to me.  
Let me be a warm embrace.
Share your troubles and be free.
Our silver linings, we shall trace.

Let me be a warm embrace
when your sorrows chill to bone.
Our silver linings, we shall trace,
your tattered heart, together sewn.

When your sorrows chill to bone,
come rest your cheek upon my wing.
Your tattered heart, together sewn -
an angel’s feathers, I shall bring.

Come rest your cheek upon my wing,
share your troubles and be free.
An angel’s feathers, I shall bring.
Friend, find solace next to me.

written 5/15/20 for
Pantoum Rhyme and Personification Contest
Picture #3

Copyright © Rhonda Johnson-Saunders | Year Posted 2020

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Mohan Chutani Date: 6/16/2020 6:49:00 AM Rhonda, a beautiful, warm friendship write. Share your troubles and be free. What else one wants. Congrats. Mohan Login to Reply Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Date: 6/18/2020 5:26:00 PM Thank you for your kindness, Mohan! Blessings, Rhonda xx

Eve Roper Date: 6/14/2020 4:58:00 PM Rhonda, Unlikely Friends, is a very inspirational write it has perfect rhyme and flow. Thank you for entering my contest. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve Login to Reply Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Date: 6/15/2020 12:18:00 AM Thank you, Eve, for the inspiration and the placement. I'm honored!! Blessings, Rhonda xx

Arturo Michael Date: 5/16/2020 2:05:00 PM A nice melody to this...with an air of care... Login to Reply Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Date: 5/22/2020 12:08:00 AM Many thanks, Arturo! xx Rhonda

Jan Allison Date: 5/15/2020 4:57:00 PM what a beautiful uplifting pantoum it is SO good to see you back Rhonda you have been away for such a long time:-( hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Date: 5/15/2020 7:19:00 PM Thanks, Jan. There was a time I thought I'd never write again. I should have known better! It's good to be back, and I hope you're well...xx Rhonda

John Gondolf Date: 5/15/2020 2:50:00 PM I enjoyed this uplifting Pantoum, Rhonda, this form is not easy to write and this one fits together so beautifully. Best of luck in the contest. John Login to Reply Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Date: 5/15/2020 7:20:00 PM Thank you, John, for your visit and well wishes! xx Rhonda