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Unleash the Hounds

Paula Swanson Contest Name Unleash Unleash the hounds Unleash the hounds, said Jones and frowned, His wife was then escaping, Running off with grandpa Joesy Brown, And his bloody teeth were shaking, Sprang in the swamp a Croc. did chomp, I’ll talk about it later, Jonesy’s wife, was on for a romp, Was she a hot potater? Toothless now the Croc. said “how. Will I be masticating, Tin leg bunged up me teeth for chow, Me union rep. is waiting,” On bended knee, Jones saw she, An he started wailing, She put him out of misery , Great love, sure is unfailing.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/29/2012 9:48:00 AM
exciting write with a gr8 flavour......congrats.......~sashi
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Date: 2/29/2012 6:12:00 AM
congratulations!
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Date: 2/28/2012 9:05:00 AM
congrats DON on a brilliant win for this marvelous write luv.. shades of Sheerlodck Holmes and Hound of the Baskervilles .
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Date: 2/28/2012 5:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your super placement in Paula's "Unleashed" contest Don. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/27/2012 11:39:00 PM
Clever as always Don and your great Australian words only make it more so. congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/23/2012 5:11:00 AM
Don, there is soo many good writers here in PSoup....and YOU are one of them.Good luck in contest!Have a nice day, be happy. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 2/23/2012 2:28:00 AM
mr. funnyman, you nailed it again with your witty sketch about relationships... clear winner, don!... keep the pen moving!..:) huggs!
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Date: 2/22/2012 11:15:00 AM
I love this, Don. Hilarious and entertaining. Thanks for the chuckles. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Kim
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Date: 2/22/2012 7:40:00 AM
LOL funny stuff love it!! YOu know how to brighten a day!!
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Date: 2/22/2012 7:40:00 AM
I am stopping by to thank you so much for your kind comments on my poetry. I enjoyed reading yours today. Have a wonderful day and please continue sharing your poetry Don. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/22/2012 6:58:00 AM
Yes, true unfailing love! I just love the crocodile within this poem, and how you integrated the hounds within your poem! Awesome write, Great Work!!
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Date: 2/22/2012 4:19:00 AM
This one really gave me a chuckle Don. Cute as a button with really good imagery. Coming from the swamp lands I could see the crocs going after them running through the swamp. Of course we had gators instead of crocs. Loved it. God Bless, JB
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