Unleash the Hounds

Paula Swanson Contest Name Unleash Unleash the hounds Unleash the hounds, said Jones and frowned, His wife was then escaping, Running off with grandpa Joesy Brown, And his bloody teeth were shaking, Sprang in the swamp a Croc. did chomp, I’ll talk about it later, Jonesy’s wife, was on for a romp, Was she a hot potater? Toothless now the Croc. said “how. Will I be masticating, Tin leg bunged up me teeth for chow, Me union rep. is waiting,” On bended knee, Jones saw she, An he started wailing, She put him out of misery , Great love, sure is unfailing.
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Prabhu Avatar
February 29, 2012 at 9:48 AM
exciting write with a gr8 flavour......congrats.......~sashi
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February 29, 2012 at 6:12 AM
congratulations!
Sweetheart Avatar
February 28, 2012 at 9:05 AM
congrats DON on a brilliant win for this marvelous write luv.. shades of Sheerlodck Holmes and Hound of the Baskervilles .
Brown Avatar
February 28, 2012 at 5:31 AM
Congratulations on your super placement in Paula's "Unleashed" contest Don. Love, Carol
Johnson Avatar
February 27, 2012 at 11:39 PM
Clever as always Don and your great Australian words only make it more so. congratulations. Love, Joyce
Andresen Avatar
February 23, 2012 at 5:11 AM
Don, there is soo many good writers here in PSoup....and YOU are one of them.Good luck in contest!Have a nice day, be happy. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Onclaud Avatar
February 23, 2012 at 2:28 AM
mr. funnyman, you nailed it again with your witty sketch about relationships... clear winner, don!... keep the pen moving!..:) huggs!
Merryman Avatar
February 22, 2012 at 11:15 AM
I love this, Don. Hilarious and entertaining. Thanks for the chuckles. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Kim
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February 22, 2012 at 7:40 AM
LOL funny stuff love it!! YOu know how to brighten a day!!
Brown Avatar
February 22, 2012 at 7:40 AM
I am stopping by to thank you so much for your kind comments on my poetry. I enjoyed reading yours today. Have a wonderful day and please continue sharing your poetry Don. Love, Carol
Sivey Avatar
February 22, 2012 at 6:58 AM
Yes, true unfailing love! I just love the crocodile within this poem, and how you integrated the hounds within your poem! Awesome write, Great Work!!
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February 22, 2012 at 4:19 AM
This one really gave me a chuckle Don. Cute as a button with really good imagery. Coming from the swamp lands I could see the crocs going after them running through the swamp. Of course we had gators instead of crocs. Loved it. God Bless, JB
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