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Unknown Knowledge

Oh magical, vast universe Transmit that uncommon wisdom Into my vital mind Inject that juicy truth Into my prowling soul For I desire to know the real Oh wondrous, never ending life Reveal your well-planned method Unveil the hypothesis of eternity Expose the deception from the legit For I crave to know the actual Oh intelligent, orderly design Disclose the nature of creation Into my probing existence Confess your penetrating vision Into my suspicious awareness For I itch to know the undiscovered

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Date: 10/10/2009 8:46:00 AM
Excellent piece, Jerrica! Welcome to PoetrySoup! Beautifully inspired sentiment and so well written! Thank you for your kind words and I look forward to sharing in the future! Love, Robin
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Date: 10/9/2009 7:07:00 PM
Welcome to PoetrySoup... Keep writing
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Date: 10/9/2009 5:07:00 PM
There is a lot of depth for the reader to ponder about in this poem. Creative perspective. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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Date: 10/9/2009 9:18:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Jerrica. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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