Unknown Fall

Like leaves from the fall, you and i must stall
Commit a crime, await a further sign
Frail and stale, we two certainly shall fail
Decision, you must create a fission

Choose you shall, you control all the morale
Fun we had until arise our great sun
See all the new choices free, unto thee
Flirtatious, your light covers all spaces

Pressure you had felt, bad hand you were dealt
Feelings i feel, to me you are my steel
Endear a fear, my dear you are my fear
Care you do, too much you do indeed care

Distant future, very instant suture
Love you i do, no matter how far you are

Poets note: the last line isnt 10 syllables, nor am i even sure that this is a correctly made sonnet, but i tried my best to stay within the pretenses
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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October 12, 2018 at 1:03 AM
clever proof :)
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