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Unknown Destiny

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                                                Outside closed window
                                               Narcissus slowly emerge
                                                    Unknown destiny

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Lisa Lee

February 15, 2011 at 3:19 PM

Awesome picture, sara! Great job!

Joe Inka

February 8, 2011 at 12:44 PM

Well if the groundhog was right everything should be ok. lol Well done

Carol Fillmore

February 8, 2011 at 9:57 AM

Very nice haiku Sara. Hope they haven't emerged too early also. Excellent title for this. Thanks Sara for your comment on Anticipation. Seems we're both writing on the same theme;) It's snowing here at the moment (yet again!! lol) although there's a feeling within that spring is starting to stir. Have no idea why this came to mine while watching the flakes flutter down, it just did! Daffodils are my favourite spring flower...they brighten the spirit:)

Carolyn Devonshire

February 8, 2011 at 9:41 AM

I hope they haven't emerged too early as there is still some winter ahead of us, Sara. Very nice work on this haiku and "Unknown Destiny" is a perfect title. Love, Carolyn