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Unknown Destiny

. Outside closed window Narcissus slowly emerge Unknown destiny

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/15/2011 3:19:00 PM
Awesome picture, sara! Great job!
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Date: 2/8/2011 12:44:00 PM
Well if the groundhog was right everything should be ok. lol Well done
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Date: 2/8/2011 9:57:00 AM
Very nice haiku Sara. Hope they haven't emerged too early also. Excellent title for this. Thanks Sara for your comment on Anticipation. Seems we're both writing on the same theme;) It's snowing here at the moment (yet again!! lol) although there's a feeling within that spring is starting to stir. Have no idea why this came to mine while watching the flakes flutter down, it just did! Daffodils are my favourite spring flower...they brighten the spirit:)
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Date: 2/8/2011 9:41:00 AM
I hope they haven't emerged too early as there is still some winter ahead of us, Sara. Very nice work on this haiku and "Unknown Destiny" is a perfect title. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/8/2011 8:27:00 AM
Everyone's destiny is unknown. Nice haiku! Yours Matthew Anish
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Date: 2/8/2011 7:13:00 AM
aww nice work and thanks sara for your kind comments god bless from diane
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Date: 2/7/2011 7:40:00 PM
A decently written haiku.
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Date: 2/7/2011 5:18:00 PM
Enjoyed the write and how are things with you. I am so behind in my reading and commenting. How is everyone coming along in your family? love phyl
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