Unknown

There lies a life after its all said and done Known to none other than the Creator and the already gone Might be on top of the mountain or deep in the woods Perhaps a flow with the winds or ebbs with the seas From above it is in store Where time is not time anymore, neither life, life no more Deep within hearts of men is a seeker known a soul Meeker and always struglling to make it a glow.

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Indiana Shaw

Date: 9/10/2017 6:12:00 AM

THE UNKNOWN . . . Within the unknown - lies a life that after all is said and done -- Known to none other than the Creator and the already - gone -- It might be on top of the mountains - or deep within the trees--Perhaps an eternal flow of the winds - or ebbs within the seas -- Or maybe it’s just in a place where time - is not time anymore -- Where neither life of the living counts as a life - to be no more

Indiana Shaw
Date: 9/10/2017 6:13:00 AM

-- Deeper within the hearts of men is a seeker - known as a soul -- Meeker and always struggling to make itself - more so known -- Copy and paste both boxes of what I have written then split the lines at each -- so it becomes 8 single lines again and try this one out - still all yours x x x