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Unknowing

Now audible, the ticking to that; Infinite and complete 'Complete absorption' -Unwillingness to concede overtakes. What I have known all my life; The only true denouement of all stories,The only true destination of all journeys - Yet I deny The mind is smart enough to realize,But the heart provides solace to that, startled mind; And convinces it of it's inability to know the time

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Beata Agustin

Date: 8/28/2024 1:05:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/21/2016 12:41:00 PM

nice to see this one again

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/22/2015 12:09:00 PM

Hi Balaji, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

Date: 5/22/2015 10:25:00 AM

Balaji, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Darlene Gifford

Date: 5/22/2015 7:55:00 AM

Welcome to poetry soup, Balaji. We are here to support and encourage each other. I enjoyed reading your poem. Hope you will post more. Maybe you would like to read one of mine.