Unknowing

Now audible, the ticking to that;
Infinite and complete 'Complete absorption'
-Unwillingness to concede overtakes.

What I have known all my life;
The only true denouement of all
stories,The only true destination of all
journeys - Yet I deny

The mind is smart enough to realize,But
the heart provides solace to that,
startled mind; And convinces it of it's
inability to know
the time
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Agustin Avatar
August 28, 2024 at 1:05 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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February 21, 2016 at 12:41 PM
nice to see this one again
A   Avatar
May 22, 2015 at 12:09 PM
Hi Balaji, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
A  Avatar
May 22, 2015 at 10:25 AM
Balaji, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
Gifford Avatar
May 22, 2015 at 7:55 AM
Welcome to poetry soup, Balaji. We are here to support and encourage each other. I enjoyed reading your poem. Hope you will post more. Maybe you would like to read one of mine.
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