- Unkissed Lips -

Young with roses on the cheeks
                                Long soft hair surrounding her face
                                  Her neck like a beautiful swan
                                Gleaming eyes seeking adventures
                                  Smells of life fruits with curiosity
                          Beginning of adult life ... a bird leaves the nest
                       Her hips are slim and soft, ready for 
                                                                            ..... life's dance
                             A beginning of a long and exciting journey
                              The arms open to receive what will come
                                Her smile ..... her lips are slightly red
                               The blood rushes, but she has no hurry
                                When the time is right
                                                                            ..... she will enjoy
                          Young beautiful shining like a perfect diamond
                              She has her thoughts, hopes and dreams
                              Dreaming of the future
                                                                             ..... kiss her gently






                                      Sponsor nette onclaud 
                                 Contest Name SOFTLY SENSUAL 
                                Deadline 9/20/2013 12:00:00 AM 


26.08.2013
A-L  Andresen :)
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(5th in the contest)
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Nance Avatar
April 17, 2014 at 6:41 AM
Beautiful words you have hear. You have a talent for description. I shall go and read more and keep enjoying :)
Andresen Avatar
April 17, 2014 at 6:45 AM
- Dear Casarah ! - Nice that you like my poems, thank you ! - read as many as you want :))) - Welcome :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Davis Avatar
March 22, 2014 at 10:48 AM
Anne Lise Such a passionate and endearing write. A journey of finding that perfect kiss from the perfect guy. thanks for the great comment on My Children Will Never Know poem.
Andresen Avatar
March 22, 2014 at 2:30 PM
- Enjoyable with a visit from you. - thanks for taking the time to read my poem, Robin. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Raina Avatar
March 8, 2014 at 11:31 AM
Wow! You have written so many poems! I am awed! Loved this one! :D
Andresen Avatar
March 8, 2014 at 12:07 PM
- Enjoyable with a visit from you. - thanks for taking the time to read my poem, Varenya. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Cavanaugh Avatar
November 23, 2013 at 8:32 PM
Wow, Anne Lise what a beautiful poem.
Andresen Avatar
November 24, 2013 at 6:00 AM
- Enjoyable with a visit from you. - thanks for taking the time to read my poem, Jon. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Retro Avatar
November 11, 2013 at 7:32 AM
wow i am speechless, portraying youthful innocence. i love it, thank you
Andresen Avatar
November 11, 2013 at 7:42 AM
Enjoyable with a visit from you. - thanks for taking the time to read my poem, Denise. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Posey Avatar
October 18, 2013 at 4:35 PM
True class with sensuous undertones.... You framed it perfectly... Great writing, sweetheart.....Jake
Andresen Avatar
October 18, 2013 at 4:36 PM
- Enjoyable with a visit from you. - thanks for taking the time to read my poem, Jake. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Cannon Avatar
October 17, 2013 at 2:41 PM
You were truly blessed with a gift for writing- love your work
Andresen Avatar
October 17, 2013 at 2:47 PM
- Enjoyable with a visit from you. - thanks for taking the time to read my poem, Jan. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Virden Avatar
October 10, 2013 at 1:11 AM
This piece is to be envied. Your heart shines through with such wisdom and grace. I'm so glad we connected. I wouldn't have wanted to miss the gift of your art! Blessings my friend
Andresen Avatar
October 10, 2013 at 4:21 AM
- Enjoyable with a visit from you. - thanks for taking the time to read my poem, Sarai. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Favors Avatar
October 5, 2013 at 11:03 PM
SIMPLY BEAUTIFUL.....(GROWTH) I WOULD LOVE FOR MY DAUGHTERS TO READ THIS ONE. I THINK IT WOULD BE SOMEWHAT INSPIRING. TO THEM ..GREAT PIECE
Andresen Avatar
October 6, 2013 at 5:55 AM
- Enjoyable with a visit from you. - thanks for taking the time to read my poem, Ronald. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Manomano Avatar
September 23, 2013 at 10:23 AM
This Poem if I could just read it to someone iv known,surely I would get Many thankyous,Such a true life story expression,I like it
Andresen Avatar
September 23, 2013 at 10:25 AM
- Enjoyable with a visit from you. - thanks for taking the time to read my poem, Edmore Leo. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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September 15, 2013 at 1:08 AM
yes,yes,yes it everything i love ,master at work thank you dear friend xxxxx duncan
Andresen Avatar
September 15, 2013 at 3:22 AM
- Duncan, thank you for nice visit, always pleasant with feed-back on what I post. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Vaso Avatar
September 13, 2013 at 4:51 PM
A very beautiful poem, loved it!!!
Andresen Avatar
September 13, 2013 at 5:02 PM
- Happy to see you liked my poem, Arthur. - thanks for your visit. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Dey Avatar
September 7, 2013 at 7:46 AM
Cogratulation on your win........(grandfriend----lol).Hope you are fine?
Andresen Avatar
September 7, 2013 at 7:53 AM
- Happy to see you liked my poem, Litan. - thanks for your visit. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Kendrick Avatar
September 3, 2013 at 12:01 PM
Very senusal winning work..Congrats on your win...Sara
Andresen Avatar
September 3, 2013 at 12:03 PM
- Thanks for the greeting, Sara. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Mannan Avatar
September 2, 2013 at 10:08 PM
Too beautiful. Many warm congrats for the win.
Andresen Avatar
September 3, 2013 at 2:40 AM
- Thanks for the greeting, Tahera. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Morgan Avatar
September 2, 2013 at 7:02 PM
Congrats on your win. Morgan
Andresen Avatar
September 3, 2013 at 2:39 AM
- Thanks for the greeting, Morgan. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Aniagyei Avatar
September 1, 2013 at 3:42 PM
Simply sensational!!! I'm totally lost in your world!
Andresen Avatar
September 2, 2013 at 1:37 AM
- Happy to see you liked my poem, Wilfred. - thanks for your visit. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Lamoureux Avatar
September 1, 2013 at 2:08 PM
Breathtaking, loved it. Congratulations.
Andresen Avatar
September 2, 2013 at 1:36 AM
- Thanks for the greeting, Richard. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Onclaud Avatar
September 1, 2013 at 1:17 PM
i am at awe by the way this turned out, anne... so tenderly passionate!.. thanks for supporting my contest and big congrats... happyy sunday huggs!..;)
Andresen Avatar
September 1, 2013 at 1:24 PM
- Thanks for letting me join .... a pleasure - Glad you liked it, Nette! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Anglesey Avatar
September 1, 2013 at 12:02 PM
WOW... I really like the way you left the phrases ...life's dance...she will enjoy...kiss her gently...Just those phrases placed to stand out by themselves make a sensual poem. beautifully soft and sensual all the way through... congrats on your win :)
Andresen Avatar
September 1, 2013 at 12:05 PM
- Thanks for the greeting, Karen. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
May Avatar
September 1, 2013 at 10:15 AM
congrats on your win Anne
Andresen Avatar
September 1, 2013 at 10:19 AM
- Thanks for the greeting, Joseph. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Ramacher Avatar
August 31, 2013 at 4:58 AM
This is one of my favourites of yours. There was a time when this could have been me except the kiss was not so gentle.
Andresen Avatar
August 31, 2013 at 5:02 AM
- Happy to see you liked my poem, Sandra. - thanks for your visit. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Mongrut Avatar
August 28, 2013 at 9:14 PM
Sensual and erotic, loved it! :)
Andresen Avatar
August 29, 2013 at 12:42 AM
- Happy to see you liked my poem, Carlos. - thanks for your visit. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Babcock Avatar
August 28, 2013 at 3:40 PM
Such a sweet poem showing the blossoming of a young woman. Her hopes, dreams and what is to come. Nice one. love phyl
Andresen Avatar
August 29, 2013 at 12:41 AM
- Happy to see you liked my poem, Phyllis. - thanks for your visit. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Deschler Avatar
August 28, 2013 at 2:58 PM
Very sweet and sensual poetry, Anne-Lise! I really enjoyed reading this poem today. Good luck in the contest! And, thank you for reading my poem, "And Nothing Else Matters". I truly appreciate your always kind comments on my work!
Andresen Avatar
August 28, 2013 at 3:00 PM
- Happy to see you liked my poem, Kelly. - thanks for your visit. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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