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Universe Unites and Unties

Black but brilliant, because this BOWL is like the biggest Colander And through each INDIVIDUAL aperture, the light expresses itself LORD forbid that any aperture in said Colander will dare compare, - Laugh in derision at other holes. We are ONE, but in different PLACES

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Anil Deo

Date: 6/1/2020 9:51:00 PM

PLACES might be SPACE/s , but I chose clarity rather than my preference for SPACE as the metaphor for God (my favorite). shalom shalom saints and angels-in-the imagination

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 6/1/2020 2:19:00 PM

A world of wonder imagery my friend. xomo

Anil Deo
Date: 6/1/2020 9:40:00 PM

Maureen, Dear One, it is the singular pleasure to write even for thee, an audience of ONE. Receptivity works with God, & it flatters me no end. Thanks, does not seem enough for your kindnesses. Anil (Paz and shalom-shalOM)