Universe of Water Particles
there is nothing to absorb
when taken outside of scale
on the inside
feeling a vacuum of temporality
forgetting, the salve
fast-track in slow-mo
undulation of gossamer breathing
stroking the skin
inhabiting bone
I feel you - feeling
fractals flip on their sharp edges
carving particles
form is spliced
remains are in rapturous form
a mass exhale
pulls out my lungs
whilst you bathe
exposure
separates the silt
succumbed to sedation -
lilting sound becomes tonal, flat
choices tilt
.choke on thought.
sighs cannot wash away
I could flail - let me flail -
yet my core is made of lead
this world is in quicksand
a held centre
a spiral
scratch the walls
beneath the flow
scratch the walls
cling to
time... . .
Inspired by 'universe of water particles' by Teamlab
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