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Universe

Eloquent in nature Unique in design Mother Nature working in a mysterious way Father Time helping her along No existing data, unable to define expanding or contracting no confirmation declared Inclusive in evidence Possibly alpha and omega Unimaginable size Searching for answers On the universe.s design.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/28/2009 8:52:00 PM
Very nicely done. Message conveyed well. Very descriptive of the universe. Thank you for your comments on Tears and Prayers. Very uplifting and encouraging.
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Date: 2/28/2009 8:23:00 PM
Phyllis, you express well the way mankind has always been "Searching for answers" as we try to find the origins of the universe. Your poem truly takes me back to the beginning of time. Great write! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/27/2009 12:56:00 AM
Thanks for your welcome comments today Phyllis.Rgds Brian
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Date: 2/26/2009 12:21:00 PM
Much to think about here. Interesting perspective and nice use of personification. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 2/25/2009 5:23:00 PM
Loved your poem immensely-Always Alexandra
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Date: 2/25/2009 12:03:00 PM
check your soup mail. john
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Date: 2/25/2009 3:33:00 AM
Interesting, searching write. A lot to ponder about, that's for sure. Love, Shar
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Date: 2/25/2009 12:49:00 AM
Well written Phyllis.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 2/24/2009 2:46:00 PM
Wow.. terrific write my friend.. the answers? the constant search..I am doing it all the time. Thanks for the comments.
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Date: 2/24/2009 2:22:00 PM
you can find those answers in the bible. when they say "big boom" more or less that means God did it. john
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