Universe

Eloquent in nature

Unique in design

Mother Nature working in a mysterious way

Father Time helping her along

No existing data, unable to define

expanding or contracting no confirmation declared

Inclusive in evidence

Possibly alpha and omega

Unimaginable size

Searching for answers

On the universe.s design.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Duhart Avatar
February 28, 2009 at 8:52 PM
Very nicely done. Message conveyed well. Very descriptive of the universe. Thank you for your comments on Tears and Prayers. Very uplifting and encouraging.
Devonshire Avatar
February 28, 2009 at 8:23 PM
Phyllis, you express well the way mankind has always been "Searching for answers" as we try to find the origins of the universe. Your poem truly takes me back to the beginning of time. Great write! Love, Carolyn
Strand Avatar
February 27, 2009 at 12:56 AM
Thanks for your welcome comments today Phyllis.Rgds Brian
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February 26, 2009 at 12:21 PM
Much to think about here. Interesting perspective and nice use of personification. Keep on writing! Karen
Hudson Avatar
February 25, 2009 at 5:23 PM
Loved your poem immensely-Always Alexandra
Loving Iii Avatar
February 25, 2009 at 12:03 PM
check your soup mail. john
Winter Avatar
February 25, 2009 at 3:33 AM
Interesting, searching write. A lot to ponder about, that's for sure. Love, Shar
Strand Avatar
February 25, 2009 at 12:49 AM
Well written Phyllis.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
Higgins Avatar
February 24, 2009 at 2:46 PM
Wow.. terrific write my friend.. the answers? the constant search..I am doing it all the time. Thanks for the comments.
Loving Iii Avatar
February 24, 2009 at 2:22 PM
you can find those answers in the bible. when they say "big boom" more or less that means God did it. john
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