Universally

As the universe 
Expands exponentially
My flower has died.

Submitted for Gareth's "Familiarity Unknown" contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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October 4, 2010 at 8:46 AM
A wonderful poem, Gareth and his wonderful contest. Now where is he again, enjoyed your poem,..p.d.
Mehta Avatar
April 14, 2010 at 10:06 PM
Good luck in the contest. A fine thought
Sweetheart Avatar
April 14, 2010 at 1:53 PM
Good luck in Gareth's contest Mike with this extraordinary Haiku... my contest "Shining Star" is open too... enjoyed your creative write...luv.. "Sweetheart"
Murphy Avatar
April 14, 2010 at 12:54 PM
very nice and good luck in the contest faleshia
Kendrick Avatar
April 14, 2010 at 10:44 AM
Interesting take on the picture...Good luck in the contest..Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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