Universal Threads - Lexi

my thoughts  orbit 
     the very  essence
 of her mystery
    pulled in by her gravity
 like poetry in motion
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June 11, 2015 at 3:58 PM
Joseph, nice win...... SKAT
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June 10, 2015 at 11:39 AM
Lovely, Joseph! I like the way you were inspired by this visual! Congrats on your First Place win! Sandra
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June 10, 2015 at 11:06 AM
You are Poetry In Motion...wow
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June 10, 2015 at 8:34 AM
Congratulations on your top win, Joseph. Your take and form both help achieve success. #7 // paul
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June 10, 2015 at 8:00 AM
dropping back with my congrats:-) Hugs jan xx
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May 16, 2015 at 5:33 PM
Hi Joseph.. Loving this Tanka... "orbiting an essence of mystery". So much passion in so few words #7 xx~xx
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May 15, 2015 at 1:03 PM
Beautifully penned Joseph - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx
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