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Universal Language of Love

Alabaster beaches, carrying dreamer's evening footprints, glisten heavenward.
Impatient Jupiter kisses lingering moon.
Neptune's ocean pulse quickens, rising slowly towards utopia.
Virgo's wondrous Xanadu yeilds zenith.



09/24/15
Contest: Sensual ABCs
Sponsor: Jade Puddifoot

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Robert Johnson

October 9, 2015 at 2:21 PM

Love the clever title. Congrats on your win of a fun write to read.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

October 8, 2015 at 2:13 AM

Wonderful write Arlene! Congrats on superb win!

Phatt Matt

October 6, 2015 at 4:52 AM

Impatient Jupiter kisses lingering moon. BEAUTIFUL READ

Skat A

October 4, 2015 at 6:51 PM

Arlene, Congrats on your beautiful win. Love SKAT

Balveen Cheema

October 3, 2015 at 11:51 PM

To my heart Arlene! A 7! Congrats on your win!

Andrea Dietrich

October 3, 2015 at 7:20 PM

ooh, love all the planetary references. Cleverly done. Congrats.

James Inman

October 3, 2015 at 6:01 PM

Arlene, such playful words! Beautifully written.

Eve Roper

October 3, 2015 at 5:06 PM

Congratulations on your win Hugs Eve

Connie Marcum Wong

October 3, 2015 at 4:36 PM

This one is a real beauty Arlene! Outstanding imagery relating to the cosmos. Congratulations on your wonderful win! #7

Charlotte Puddifoot

October 3, 2015 at 4:07 PM

this was very different, going the planetary/astrological/universal route, and i enjoy different takes...it was one of the most beautiful entries i received; i particularly like "neptune's ocean pulse quickens' - lovely - and virgo happens to be my star sign, so another reason to love it! (i before e in yields) congrats on your win in my contest!

Arlene Smith

October 16, 2015 at 5:44 PM

Thank you so much fear friend!!