Universal Language

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universal language 


                  sublimating v
     hale bopp tail splays ice debris ~
             sign of cosmic peace

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Jan Allison

Date: 5/17/2022 2:51:00 PM

superb imagery and image ... lets hope anyone landing to earth comes in peace:-) hugs Jan xx

David Kavanagh
Date: 5/17/2022 3:01:00 PM

Your comment is priceless Jan, they would probably run a few light years away, when they see our wars, but indeed it’s a universal message of peace, cheers David

Sam Kauffman

Date: 5/17/2022 11:03:00 AM

So lovely David. I like that you are illustrating signs of peace in our cosmic world! Soup mail.

David Kavanagh
Date: 5/17/2022 1:41:00 PM

Thank you Sam, indeed a one for all universal peace sign, it beats war and destruction any day, thanks for the mail, cheers David

Mike Gentile

Date: 5/16/2022 5:30:00 AM

I would love to be more enlightened! I love your thinking David!! Terrific haiku!!

David Kavanagh
Date: 5/16/2022 8:23:00 AM

Ha wouldn’t we all love to be totally enlightened Mike, I'm just a freethinking bloke, I’m always open to reason and logic, then I tend to look at it from outside the box, bonkers eh, cheers David

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/15/2022 7:42:00 PM

But put humans into the mix and it won't be long before you have conflict. Interesting one David. Tom

David Kavanagh
Date: 5/15/2022 8:48:00 PM

Indeed that was part of my thinking Tom, a message to us perhaps, how things should be done, but a lot of these metaphoric signs go over our heads quite literally, cheers David