Uninvitedinfection

Never said yes
And no chance to say no
Both inebriated
So you thought that was the chance for you to go

No violence from what I remember
I woke up in the midst
Too messed up to say a word
Or know the order of events

I dont even know the face
I only thought it was you
And you say it was him, too
My self feels so displaced

Should've paid attention to the signs 
But was too naive
Invite me somewhere unfamiliar
And use the tricks up your sleeve

Just to get off
You shatter the outlook of a young girl
Just to get off 
You put a curtain over my world

Due to your ill wishes and your sickness
I was too dumb to speak
Too embarrassed, too ashamed
I thought it was defeat

After one realization came another
Eventually, nothing is at it seems
While growing up you're given lessons
With age wisdom gets more keen

I can forgive but won't forget
I've also gained through your deception
I've learned not to lose all hope through this
Uninvited infection

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 6/24/2012 9:58:00 PM
the message is clear, the tune sad. We all understand, atimes l° pause to think, and yet find no sufficient reason, why people or men behave in such a barbaric manner. Nice write, good read. Love always. Magnus
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Date: 6/13/2012 8:52:00 PM
Have to keep hope alive always. Very well written!
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Justcallme Britt
Date: 6/13/2012 8:58:00 PM
*fist in the air* <3
Date: 6/2/2012 5:23:00 AM
Intense is a slight word for this write. Outrageous, savage, inhumane... doesn't even describe it. Point me to him- give that guy a good roundhouse in the family jewels THEN send him to prison. Anyhow, this was TOO well written and explains the obvious reason women do not often report it to authorities. I feel for you, sweetheart. Amazing write you have here, and it's going into my favorites for sure.
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Date: 6/2/2012 1:04:00 AM
Very intense write here.!! Excellent work of art!!!
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