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Unintended Innuendo Poetry Contest
Sponsor is Unseeking Seeker
Sixth PlaceConquering  others takes force ~conquering yourself is true strengthLao Tzu

Unintended Innuendo


“as we passed her she did wilt
which caused in us sense of guilt
since our stance perhaps did cause
to put her heart’s joy on pause

though we’re gentle, not hostile
we diminished her soul’s smile
since our aura as she viewed
scent of love did not exude” —Unseeking Seeker

the passersby wailed in laughter
with a blink of an eye she sought the here after
prompting hatred she'd rid and had been 
gone the sun's soul beaming within
left are the pieces contusion once dealt
exemplification deep purple, blue/black welt
anticipating that it is all in the imagination
innuendo scorns, undertones as intimidation                          
the nuances of facial expression and body language
an undercurrent hides beneath an open bridge 
the windy storm blows farther its opaque steam 
whilst whispering mantras gently stream
uttering phonemes begin and she softly chants  
deep breaths balm lofty thoughts further enhance                                                                   
‘I choose and listen how my inner voice druthers, 
and not the random opinions of others’
forgiveness is the fragrance the violet sheds—perfume  
on the heel that has crushed it, where sweet aromas loom
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Poet Avatar
May 22, 2025 at 12:25 PM
Back with heartfelt congratulations on your contest win with this fantastic poem dear Anaya. Warm hugs to you
Anaya Avatar
May 22, 2025 at 2:44 PM
Thank you SP, I am overjoyed with your visit and warm hugs!
Beaufort Avatar
May 7, 2025 at 5:20 PM
Anaya, I especially like the last lines of the poem about forgiveness. It does make it possible to live life in the present and perhaps even enjoy it. The way the subject chants and chooses to view the world is a very insightful exploration of how we can move on and experience some joy. It matches the picture. It is a form of graduation and brings one to crossroads of a sorts. Wonderful! Take care and smiles!!
Anaya Avatar
May 9, 2025 at 7:43 PM
the ending resembles karma, Duke. It's a sad truth when one has been mistaken or mistakes what really wasn't an innuendo or undertones really never existed, who really is the one searching for attention? This gentle, Janist like , fi stanzas of Seekers, has me wondering who 'they' are. Ty you too~
Empress Avatar
May 4, 2025 at 9:45 AM
Dear Anaya, youve written a very thoughr provoking and intriguing take on the line of enquiry! I love the use of colors and the flow of lines as well as the artwork and your spoken word generated for this too, sounds natural. Especially loved the lines “forgiveness is the fragrance the violet sheds—perfume on the heel that has crushed it, where sweet aromas loom” deep and heartfelt! Pleasure visiting your poem today! Best wishes for the contest! Sending you light
Anaya Avatar
May 4, 2025 at 1:37 PM
oops! lol. i was mistaken, perhaps I'll add another 4 lines TY I mean it.
Empress Avatar
May 4, 2025 at 11:26 AM
Its supposed to be atleast ten lines it can be more than ten lines, maybe you should write more
Anaya Avatar
May 4, 2025 at 10:58 AM
Hey, I wished I could do more, a limit of 10 lines stopped me, i squeezed lines together ah ha ha. Ty dearest!
Tor Avatar
May 3, 2025 at 2:25 PM
Such a heartfelt write Anaya. How we sometimes are inflicted with subtle pains that hurt within. We all experience it, sometimes rightfully so, and sometimes not. We are human. Forgiving and moving on in itself is strength to overcome our feelings which have been hurt. I always Look as the person as a whole not just one difference of opinion. I try and respect others point of view sharing mine. We must always be as kind to one another in our words to share when we have a difference of opinion...
Anaya Avatar
May 3, 2025 at 4:32 PM
Michael, Ty. I pray for strength, because is what is needed most of all to help not just yourself for others, empathy is very important as well dear poet. I really love that you came to visit, its heart-warming a fave is fabulous, i'll never forget it! Wishing you much musings for your poetry ~ xhugs Anaya
Tor Avatar
May 3, 2025 at 2:29 PM
We are not perfect we are human and human beings make mistakes I have made many. I really love how you wrote this with compassion and forgiveness, and it really touched me. I feel compelled to Favor this one. I favor a lot of your poetry because they always reach our inner soul and there is deep meaning in your words. A favorite my Dear Anaya...
Hind Avatar
May 3, 2025 at 12:37 PM
Wow, a powerful intensity behind this- so many beautiful lines, "gone the Sun's soul beaming within" "forgiveness is the fragrance the violet sheds—perfume on the heel that has crushed it,"
Anaya Avatar
May 4, 2025 at 2:50 PM
Paige, its a good line, i thought, what's better than the sunshining through, ty poet!!
Poet Avatar
May 3, 2025 at 12:09 PM
Dear Anaya. Your great poetry delves into issues of dedication, mercy, and the conflict between outward views and one's own voice. It examines the suffering inflicted by others, the healing process, and, ultimately, the value of confidence and personal progress.
Anaya Avatar
May 4, 2025 at 8:25 AM
US's "scent of love did not exude” and "our stance" gave me the feel that these powerful ones had weakened her, belittling her, even if they didn't see it. She did the right thing, turn the cheek. I enjoy your insights, SP. Ty
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