Uninhibited

My heart is open and my lips are sealed
My voice is silenced but the words need not be spoken
You know my every thought 
You know my soul
You reach for me
Gentle are your strong hands that pull me in closer
I feel your breath warm upon my neck
My heart melts into yours as your arms embrace me
Soft are your fingertips as they gently caress my cheek
Sweet is the taste of your tender kiss
I am yours completely and yours I will remain
Nothing held back 
All is surrendered
Given to you in trust 
I am yours and yet I am free
Free to love unconditionally
I am captive
Captive to the magic that surrounds us
But I am not bound
All of me given to all of you
I am uninhibited 




Copyright © 2009   Lena “Lolita” Townsend
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Shango Avatar
April 6, 2009 at 7:43 AM
The purest love is the greatest surrender, only those who know it can describe its beauty so well. Shalom
Williams Avatar
April 3, 2009 at 9:51 AM
Terrific love poem Lolita... beautifully expressed.... thank you so much for your comment
Docherty Avatar
April 2, 2009 at 8:51 AM
So many things to which this strength of love could refer, be it your passion for your partner, the sun and nature on your neck, or your profound faith? Cleverly worded it suits many and so means something different to each of your readers... Nice one! Anna-Marie.
Strand Avatar
April 2, 2009 at 12:25 AM
Your title reveals all Lolita.Look forward to more of your creative 'outpourings'.Have a good day.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
Devonshire Avatar
April 1, 2009 at 5:44 PM
A joyous write that is an outstanding tribute to true love, Lolita! Indeed, the magic an capture us when we fall in love.
Chircop Avatar
April 1, 2009 at 3:25 PM
deep love"all of me given all to you" deep emotions in this wonderfully penned poem-charma
Winter Avatar
April 1, 2009 at 1:02 PM
The most wonderful kind of relationship, where you have such trust and faith in your love, you are totally free to surrender completely. It is a gift of gifts I know of and share. We are lucky. Such a beautiful write! Love, Shar
Moreno Avatar
April 1, 2009 at 12:49 PM
Great description you have mentioned here, I like the title, it works well...Raul
Charlton Avatar
April 1, 2009 at 10:58 AM
crys :o) very nice im not one for bige words and meanings but this is great
Strand Avatar
April 1, 2009 at 8:57 AM
Thanks for your thoughtful blog comments today Lolita.Rgds Brian
Lucas Avatar
April 1, 2009 at 6:47 AM
Wow Lolita!! Excellent write here. I love the nexus of unconditional love and romantic fervor that you create here!! You are an awesome poet!! Thanks mucho, Wood
Higgins Avatar
April 1, 2009 at 4:51 AM
A heart that loves freely is the most beautiful sound to hear..this is a very good write and you captured the freedom very well....
Ginn Avatar
April 1, 2009 at 3:00 AM
Baby from the first lines I bought it all. Wonderfully passionate write.
Rhinem Avatar
April 1, 2009 at 1:22 AM
Smile~"Beautiful Write Precious & Truly Gifted Lena Townsend!!!:):)~What a very fortunate man indeed, to hold Your heart and Your love in such a way!!!:):)~I sincerely hope that he realizes what a very rare treasure of a lady that he holds!!?:):)~Soo much beautiful passion within this perfect write dear Lena~"Astonishingly Exquisite!!!:):)~"My Love Always To 'You & Your Loves,' John!!!"~Sweet Dreams Dear!!!:):)
Strand Avatar
April 1, 2009 at 12:35 AM
Like the bio/kyrielle flavour here Lolita.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments on my Yellowstone series etc
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