Uninformed

There was a wicked woman known as Jill
who fell in wild love with handsome Bill.
His looks were quite charming,
but violence alarming.
Late Jill wasn't aware looks can kill.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Lamoureux Avatar
February 10, 2020 at 8:41 AM
Oh my, she should have stuck with Jack.
Schneiter Avatar
February 17, 2020 at 10:42 AM
Indeed, Jack would have been a better choice, even with a broken crown. Thanks, Richard, for calling to mind that old nursery rhyme.
Laurie Avatar
January 9, 2020 at 11:54 PM
G'day Paul … unfortunately your limerick has been chillingly fact - thanks Paul - Lindsay
Schneiter Avatar
January 12, 2020 at 7:33 AM
Thank you, Lindsay. I agree: Good looks come with hooks. Hugs, Paul
Allison Avatar
January 6, 2020 at 1:54 AM
VERY clever ending Paul, so glad to see you writing limericks again:-) hugs Jan x
Schneiter Avatar
January 9, 2020 at 7:10 AM
Thank you, ever-gracious Jan. It's a bit forced, but salvaged by the last line. I enjoy writing limericks, especially when you kindly comment on them. Hugs, Paul
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