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Uninformed

There was a wicked woman known as Jill who fell in wild love with handsome Bill. His looks were quite charming, but violence alarming. Late Jill wasn't aware looks can kill.

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 2/10/2020 8:41:00 AM

Oh my, she should have stuck with Jack.

Paul Schneiter
Date: 2/17/2020 10:42:00 AM

Indeed, Jack would have been a better choice, even with a broken crown. Thanks, Richard, for calling to mind that old nursery rhyme.

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 1/9/2020 11:54:00 PM

G'day Paul … unfortunately your limerick has been chillingly fact - thanks Paul - Lindsay

Paul Schneiter
Date: 1/12/2020 7:33:00 AM

Thank you, Lindsay. I agree: Good looks come with hooks. Hugs, Paul

Jan Allison

Date: 1/6/2020 1:54:00 AM

VERY clever ending Paul, so glad to see you writing limericks again:-) hugs Jan x

Paul Schneiter
Date: 1/9/2020 7:10:00 AM

Thank you, ever-gracious Jan. It's a bit forced, but salvaged by the last line. I enjoy writing limericks, especially when you kindly comment on them. Hugs, Paul