Uniform

uniform silence dawn’s blatant bugle exhales forcefully revoking sleep recruits jump to feet bounce a quarter off their sheets commander shows no bias
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Wolf Avatar
October 9, 2023 at 7:56 PM
Ha, ha. Brings back memories. First of camp, then of army barracks. I wonder, do they use crypto-coins now?! lol.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 10, 2023 at 9:26 AM
Thanks for your service! Crypto-coins…lol! Will they bounce high or low? Thanks for your service…salute! ;)
Hind Avatar
October 9, 2023 at 6:36 PM
Ugh, military..I respect them, but they sure do go through a lot...they're our country's heroes.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 10, 2023 at 9:28 AM
Navy boot camp wasn’t as intimidating as others. I just watched the series “The Pacific.” What those marines went through, they never truly were paid enough for. God bless those in harms way.
Empress Avatar
October 9, 2023 at 3:13 AM
Beautiful sedoka! Creative imagery, i can feel the uniform silence and those exhales. As dawn breaks. what an intriguing write! Love this
Rodrigues Avatar
October 9, 2023 at 6:54 AM
I appreciate you! Thank you! Love writing brief forms.
Rolland Avatar
October 8, 2023 at 3:25 PM
wonderful poem, i could hear them, yann
Rodrigues Avatar
October 8, 2023 at 7:02 PM
Thanks, Yann!
Dietrich Avatar
October 8, 2023 at 1:24 PM
oh this is so cool, I really like this, Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 8, 2023 at 2:52 PM
Thanks so much, Andrea!
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