Unidentified Feelings

Under a smile - pain.
Faces are good at hiding
Oppressive feelings.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Dietrich Avatar
May 2, 2013 at 2:32 PM
I LOVE yours and the way you used UFO for your own term!!! awesome poem. Congrats.
De La Croes Avatar
May 3, 2013 at 5:33 AM
Thank you, Andrea. I am ecouraged by your comments! David
Posey Avatar
May 2, 2013 at 2:10 PM
Perfect haiku for contest entry. Congrats on your win.... Jake
De La Croes Avatar
May 3, 2013 at 5:34 AM
Thanks, Jake. Much appreciated comment. David
Gorelick Avatar
May 2, 2013 at 10:59 AM
Insightful little piece. congrats on your win. BG
De La Croes Avatar
May 3, 2013 at 5:35 AM
Thank you for your comment, Barbara. David
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
May 2, 2013 at 12:22 AM
Many congrats David xx
De La Croes Avatar
May 2, 2013 at 5:40 AM
Thank you very much, Mandy!
A   Avatar
May 1, 2013 at 7:02 PM
David, congratulations in Robert's contest. ~LINDA
De La Croes Avatar
May 2, 2013 at 5:39 AM
Thanks, Linda.
Oyewole Avatar
May 1, 2013 at 5:59 PM
Congrats on your win~A.O
De La Croes Avatar
May 2, 2013 at 5:39 AM
Thanks, A.O. Peace..., David
Heemstra Avatar
May 1, 2013 at 3:58 PM
I know all too well of smiles and pain. Thank you for your entry
De La Croes Avatar
May 2, 2013 at 5:38 AM
Thank you. Glad that you like it... David
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