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Unidentified Feelings

Under a smile - pain. Faces are good at hiding Oppressive feelings.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 5/2/2013 2:32:00 PM
I LOVE yours and the way you used UFO for your own term!!! awesome poem. Congrats.
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David De la Croes
Date: 5/3/2013 5:33:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea. I am ecouraged by your comments! David
Date: 5/2/2013 2:10:00 PM
Perfect haiku for contest entry. Congrats on your win.... Jake
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David De la Croes
Date: 5/3/2013 5:34:00 AM
Thanks, Jake. Much appreciated comment. David
Date: 5/2/2013 10:59:00 AM
Insightful little piece. congrats on your win. BG
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David De la Croes
Date: 5/3/2013 5:35:00 AM
Thank you for your comment, Barbara. David
Date: 5/2/2013 12:22:00 AM
Many congrats David xx
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David De la Croes
Date: 5/2/2013 5:40:00 AM
Thank you very much, Mandy!
Date: 5/1/2013 7:02:00 PM
David, congratulations in Robert's contest. ~LINDA
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David De la Croes
Date: 5/2/2013 5:39:00 AM
Thanks, Linda.
Date: 5/1/2013 5:59:00 PM
Congrats on your win~A.O
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David De la Croes
Date: 5/2/2013 5:39:00 AM
Thanks, A.O. Peace..., David
Date: 5/1/2013 3:58:00 PM
I know all too well of smiles and pain. Thank you for your entry
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David De la Croes
Date: 5/2/2013 5:38:00 AM
Thank you. Glad that you like it... David