Unicorn

Fly
Greek
protector
of the forest.
These great and powerful creatures will roam.
Step softly on the grass, no noise was heard.
A unicorn 
appears when
all else
fails!

lifetetractys

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Jack Horne

June 21, 2011 at 1:03 PM

Crikey, I didn't realise how many contest results I'd missed while co judging with Carolyn - please forgive hasty message - many congrats to you for all your recent wins : )

Carol Sunshine Brown

June 21, 2011 at 10:11 AM

Congratulations on your win in Chris's "Double The Fun" contest Cory. Love, Carol

M. Alpestris

June 20, 2011 at 7:36 AM

Cool entry to the contest...congratulations to you!

Dr.Ram Mehta

June 19, 2011 at 3:41 PM

My congratulations on the win in the contest of chris, cory

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

June 19, 2011 at 9:34 AM

This one made me smile, Cory-- really enjoyed how you made your tetractys about the beautiful unicorn! Super congrats on your win :D

Wilma Neels

June 19, 2011 at 4:20 AM

Stunning piece Cory, congratulations on your win in Chris' contest :)

Kash Poet

June 19, 2011 at 1:12 AM

Lovely poem...congrats Cory on your win.

Andrea Dietrich

June 18, 2011 at 10:18 PM

Cory, I adore unicorn poems. Thanks for coming up with this one for us all to see. It's awesome! Congratulations in Chris' contest.

Nette Onclaud

June 18, 2011 at 10:04 PM

raving KUDOS to you for the special win, cory :) huggs

Francine Roberts

June 18, 2011 at 9:36 PM

love it, congrats on your win in Chris's contest Cory

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

June 16, 2011 at 9:08 PM

just luv unicorns too cory.. great imagery my friend.. feeling the wings fly past me with your words my friend..luv..

Poet Destroyer A

June 16, 2011 at 5:21 PM

ooooo! favorite,,, favorite,,,, love..it... and my room is full of unicorns,,,,, I'm a unicorn freak..lol...

Dinda Minardi

June 16, 2011 at 7:31 AM

It was fun to read your poem :)

Matthew Anish

June 16, 2011 at 6:53 AM

Greatly imaginative poem! Peace and Blessings Matthew Anish

Jslambert Mister Roboto

June 15, 2011 at 7:11 PM

And even when all else fails, Never...I mean NEVER...Play Leapfrog with a UNICORN! It can be a real pain in the butt!-----Serious though, Peaceful Poetry brother and thank you for your support!

Dr.Ram Mehta

June 15, 2011 at 5:42 PM

Nice observation and informative piece on unicorn, cory

Roxanna Johnson

June 15, 2011 at 5:32 PM

I love unicorns so I enjoyed this <3

James Foulk

June 15, 2011 at 2:31 PM

a great piece of fine poetry.

Carolyn Devonshire

June 15, 2011 at 1:36 PM

Awesome, Cory. Love the mythological tie in this write. Long ago I posted a poem by the same name. You'll do very well in the contest with this entry. Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick

June 15, 2011 at 1:22 PM

Excellent magic..Good luck in the contest...Reads like a winner..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

June 15, 2011 at 12:31 PM

We have so many amazing writers here at PoetrySoup and I enjoy reading all the poems. I am happy your poetry was among the poems I was able to read today Cory. Please continue to write and share your poetry with the world. Love, Carol

Zzzzz Zzzzz

June 15, 2011 at 12:07 PM

A fine write, with a mystical feel to it.

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

June 15, 2011 at 12:04 PM

I love unicorns, they are magical creatures and your poems is perfectly written as a Tetractys. However, I need to say that unicorns are not Chinese of origin, but Greek. Their nature does evoke purity and the pursuit of safeguard purity. On your last line of the first stanza, it feels like something is missing. I do like your second stanza. Best of luck in the contest. Thank you also for your kind comments on my poems. Best wishes, Caroline.

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