Unhindered

wisp light ripples through
spring honey on alder field
down forest earth trail
cool rhythmic river flows, veers
stretch tight amid space and time

6/6/2021
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June 8, 2021 at 2:33 PM
Love this. Reminds me of the river that was at the bottom of the hill down from our house when I was little. I loved that river. God Bless, JB
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June 6, 2021 at 10:46 PM
Beautiful scene. Loved the rippling river. Hugs
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