Liam Mcdaid Poet Free verse

Unheavenly

Hollow eyes of a skull shrouded by a heavy mist
People suffer condemning others within foul hate
Hateful stares piercing through the back of their skulls soul domain
Raping hearts violently shred inner purity 
Inside deep council weeping in ugly visions hurt
Tainted with nightshades unforgiving it creates wars
 
Ugly bitterness seeping into their spines chilling
Nobility breaking chains in bondage heart aching
Blood sucking leeches drain life from the living temple
Greedy vultures picking dead meat from the bones altar
Twisted talons, judgment overpowers emotions 
Merciless machines killing without love and conscience
 
Turns upside down human virtue inside this world's wrath
We all know our hearts plea for justice's sake writhes in lies
Devoured by parasites, greed is the choice of weapon
Yet ignorance plays its role turning blindly the eyes
Rolling down crocodile tears, colorless emotions
Tears bleed bathing inside heartache's shameful reminder
 
Raindrops of deep hurt remains within salted old wounds
Holding love as the most precious and purest gift pearl
Undying beauty fading ashes dust blowing
Over memories stored in a yellowish photo
In what is right and what is wrong we cannot deny
Rainbow remnants pull on a thread of thought sewn deeply


A Collaborated Poem by Liam Mc Daid and Angeline lim
This poem is written in the Unheavenly style that we created. It's written in 6 lines of 13 syllables.

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Angeline Haikutwinkle June 29, 2016 at 4:54 AM Love the dark theme...... it's an eye-opener ;)

Dorian Petersen Potter June 28, 2016 at 10:29 AM Hi Liam!Wow!Wow!This is a very beautiful, powerful, but very deep and sad,filled of so many emotions poem,you've written here my dearest friend Liam,in collaboration with Angeline.All so very beautifully written in all its sadness.Just awesome!A very beautiful, heartfelt,profound love poem to be held very close to my heart.Just amazing!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful!Outstanding imagery!Excellent collaboration.Your pens are truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + each!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^