Unhappy Anniversary

Shaking in trembles, tremor within. 
A delicate pivot, shifts in separation.
Consolation comforts, the loss of win.
My first year of divorce, set in liberation. 

Bushwhacked, travelling back in time..
Reflections,... on dark night window.
Shredded heart, in melancholy chime.
Voice not so dulcet, in tears a wet pillow. 

I was once your only love, you ever knew.
nonverbal dreams in your eyes of allure.
Law settled rich, in favor of revenue.
In acrimony of hate, split ruins.. of poor.

Joining torn papers, pieces ripped off..
Crawling and dodging,  in slow boredom.
Healing cruel cracks of scorn and scoff,
hopes of Oasis in mirage of freedom.

Am I waiting for greetings and message?
Anniversary of an unhappy scar. 
Scrambling albums, photos in wreckage,
Yes, we celebrate free.... as prisoners of war.



PLACED FIRST IN THE CONTEST


23rd February 2019
Submitted to Eight Word Anniversary contest
Sponsor Michelle Faulkner 
Theme.. Describe any anniversary using given 8 words
mirage,dulcet,consolation, pivot,favor, nonverbal,
delicate,  allure
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019


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Date: 3/20/2019 1:38:00 PM
Hello Debjani Mitra, so nice to meet you. Wow! I guess tht not all anniversaries are happy ones. Congratulations on your win. Have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 3/20/2019 6:43:00 AM
Congratulations! So well written, Debjani! Love, Panagiota
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Date: 2/27/2019 10:24:00 PM
Well penned. We can all relate. Congrats on your well deserved win, Debjani.
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Date: 2/26/2019 4:01:00 AM
Wow, Debjani, you convey so much emotion and yet survival. Congrats on your win, enjoyed reading it.
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Date: 2/25/2019 11:06:00 PM
Congrats on your gold medal win, Debjani. Well done.
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Date: 2/24/2019 1:12:00 AM
This so eloquently shows the heartbreak of divorce and the scars it leaves, congratulations on your win in my contest!
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Debjani Mitra
Date: 2/24/2019 5:15:00 AM
Thanks for the appreciation and placement.
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