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a decayed unfulfilled dream of mine an antique coin that has oxidized on both sides coated brown and green as if dry gangrene has set in on a dead tissue no longer flickering light when kissed by the sun (Yalto) Patina Poetry Contest/Winner(10th Place) Sponsored by Anthony Slausen Date written and posted: 06/30/2018

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Christuraj Alex

Date: 6/24/2021 12:54:00 AM

Congratulations!

Constance La France

Date: 5/6/2020 11:37:00 AM

Edward, I love all your Yaltos but this one is my favorite _Constance

Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/6/2020 12:39:00 PM

It's mine as well, Constance:-) This poem is really special to me. Thanks for the lovely visit, my friend!

Brenda Chiri

Date: 1/26/2020 4:53:00 AM

Edward congrats on your top win!;)

Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/26/2020 5:15:00 AM

Thank you very much, Brenda;-)

Sam Kauffman

Date: 1/25/2020 7:09:00 PM

Stunning images, my friend! Congratulations on this powerfully stated theme!

Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/25/2020 9:31:00 PM

Thank you, Sam:-)

Eve Roper

Date: 8/27/2018 7:25:00 PM

Wonderful poem and fantastic form....

Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/27/2018 8:16:00 PM

Thank you very much, Eve!:-)

Susan Gentry

Date: 7/4/2018 10:56:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. Well done!

Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/5/2018 6:29:00 AM

Thank you so much, Susan!:-)

Line Gauthier

Date: 7/4/2018 10:35:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Edward. Well done.

Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/5/2018 6:28:00 AM

Thank you very much, Line!

Eve Roper

Date: 7/4/2018 2:47:00 PM

Wonderful poem, Edward, love the imagery".. .. Congratulations on your win... Hugs Eve

Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/4/2018 4:55:00 PM

Thank you so much, Eve!:-) Happy July 4th!

Susan Ashley

Date: 7/3/2018 10:57:00 PM

Wow! Edward, your write is expressed with poetic power and metaphoric beauty. Absolutely amazing! Congratulations on your wonderful win! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/4/2018 8:50:00 AM

Thank you so much, Susan!:-) Glad you loved my newly created form!

Carrie Richards

Date: 7/3/2018 2:59:00 PM

Wow...."as if dry gangrene has set in..." Amazing comparisons here Edward! I'm taken by the power of this small poem ! Well done!

Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/3/2018 5:56:00 PM

Thank you so much, Carrie!:-)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/3/2018 2:35:00 PM

Edward, you took the shine right off of my 'ancient coins' collection...Congrats on your placement in the contest! ~ Gershon

Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/3/2018 5:59:00 PM

Thank you, Gershon:-) I wish I had such a collection!

Lyric Man

Date: 6/30/2018 7:20:00 AM

Edward.. So glad I had the opportunity to read your interesting and beautifully crafted poem this morning. I'm heading home from a road gig today and won't have this chance again for a while. Happy Weekend!

Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/30/2018 8:05:00 AM

Thank you so much for the wonderful comments and visit, LM!:-) This is a form I just created! Happy weekend to you, too!