Unfulfilled

Desires unfulfilled affection gone astray needs ignored and imagination plays in bed alone emotions groan mind begins to roam LOVE soon leaves home Lay
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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July 11, 2011 at 7:53 AM
good morning! Lay,,., how are you? And yes this time I missed you and alot of other poets. I sure missed your poetry as well, glad to have stopped by take care,..p.d.
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June 13, 2011 at 10:21 AM
Lay, I saw your contest and would love to write for it, but I wasn't able to have children. I'm sure you'll get some find entries though. So many poets here write wonderful poems about their children. Love, Carolyn
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June 12, 2011 at 3:56 PM
Lay, this is the way breakups begin. Ignoring needs and turning off the affection will lead anyone astray. Sad but poignant poem. Love, Carolyn
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June 12, 2011 at 3:24 PM
emotionally charged write Lay.. feeling the unfulfilled desires u expressed luv.. sensitive and touching ...luv..
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