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Unforgotten Shores

Take me back to yesterday's summer night Walking on the beach, Sand between our toes Hair blowing in the breeze. When ripples in the sea slowly cleansed the sand, Tickling our toes, Washing away our footsteps. On the edge where ocean meets land, Shoulder to shoulder we sat, Listening to calm splashing waves, Our tanned skin soaking wet. As skies twinkled in the horizon, reflecting against the rushing tide. It seemed as they have arrived to be placed inside your eyes. Gazing at the sun sink into the sea, Fireflies flickered as embers kept us warm. Affectionately we embraced nature's silence with only the sound of our heartbeats. Too frail are these feet now to stroll along those shores, but you remain harboured within my heart. Together we've seen many waves kiss dry sands, But unlike unfaithful tides,you still hydrate my soul. We yearn to end it that way, to be taken back to yesterday's summer night, but are content building sandcastles, along current coastlines.
A Collaboration with Silent One. Thankyou S.O. for this opportunity.It was great collaborating with you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 12/10/2018 2:41:00 PM
"It seemed as they have arrived to be placed inside your eyes." This metaphor. This metaphor...
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Date: 10/27/2018 12:35:00 AM
Hi Charmaine, this is a wonderful collaboration by yourself and Silent. Two talented poets sing as one and a priceless jewel is born. The content sings to me. I love the way your pens have merged seamlessly. Two poets writing with one pen. I love the content of the write, such beauty held within the words. A definite fave. Have a wonderful Saturday. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 8/30/2018 5:56:00 AM
Exceptional poetry by two immensely talented poets that I consider to be my friends! I not roaming this site to read much poetry lately, missed this brilliant gem! You both write together so very well and so evident of giving from true poetic hearts!!!! A fav,, a precious jewel.
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Date: 8/23/2018 7:42:00 AM
Ah, I recall those days...aging is not easy or pleasant; it's a good thing that we have these memories, in which, to revel despite time's passing. Beautifully penned.
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Date: 8/20/2018 7:11:00 PM
Charms, this was the sanguine and sensual recipe I needed to recover from the heavy weight of your most recent and sad write. This was like drinking in romantic perfection. I salute you and SO on an amazing collaboration!
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Date: 8/19/2018 1:39:00 PM
You did a great job collaborating with Silent One, Charma. And it's really nice seeing you back around here at Soup. I hope your life is going really well, and I just bet it is!!
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Date: 8/19/2018 1:38:00 PM
You did a great job collaborating with Silent One, Charma. And it's really nice seeing you back around here at Soup. I hope your life is going really well, and I just bet it is!!
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Date: 8/18/2018 8:54:00 AM
As yesterday's memories float away with breeze, they still remain "harboured within the heart"..Beautiful collaboration Charmaine and Silent One..
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Date: 8/18/2018 8:15:00 AM
You two did a beautiful job of this one. I can relate as I am drawn to the water. Hugs Rick.
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Date: 8/18/2018 5:12:00 AM
well written, a great read.
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Date: 8/17/2018 12:23:00 PM
A beautiful collaboration that earns applause for you and for Silent one, Charma. I love the romantic sojourn on the beach. Many lovely images and one line jumped out at me: "But unlike unfaithful tides, you still hydrate my soul." Stay hydrated and beautiful, dear friend. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/17/2018 8:21:00 AM
Poetic and sensuous as always, well written.
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Date: 8/17/2018 7:42:00 AM
Beautifully written. Congratulations to the both of you. :)
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Date: 8/17/2018 7:31:00 AM
This was a stunning and magical poem of love and affection. The scenes this creates in the mind and heart are beautiful.
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 8/17/2018 7:40:00 AM
Oh..I'm so glad you like it Chris...Thankyou.
Date: 8/17/2018 7:04:00 AM
Was a pleasure to collaborate with you Charmaine... Your idea for this poem was great and the words just flowed... Thank you..
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 8/17/2018 12:24:00 PM
Silent One, this is truly a remarkable collaboration. Congratulations on your excellent work together!
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 8/17/2018 7:37:00 AM
Thanks for inviting me to collab with you.It was an honour.Its been so long since I last collabed with someone,so I thankyou even for being patient with me.I'm glad we did this poem tog.It was a fun experience..and though I suggested the idea of the old couple :)..,it was,you who made this poem as lovely as it is.Thankyou.
Date: 8/17/2018 6:58:00 AM
A very romantic and reflective poem..lovingly depicted. Kudos to you, Charmaine and S.O. on this collaboration.
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 8/17/2018 7:41:00 AM
Thanks so much for reading.
Date: 8/17/2018 2:54:00 AM
Your magical touch brings this poem to life Charmu
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 8/17/2018 7:45:00 AM
Oh I'm glad you enjoyed reading the poem Tim.. I'm glad you find our words magical..Thankyou.

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