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Unforgiving

Unforgiving
like unceasing wildfires
raging out of control.
Unforgiving
like a ferocious avalanche
engulfing everything in its path.
Unforgiving
like a wind-blown blizzard
in bone-chilling winter.
She turns a deaf ear
to his entreaties
for forgiveness.
The death knell
has sounded
on their union.
Wronged
just once;
once was enough.
Submitted for... Strand Select Q,Any Form ,Any Theme Poetry Contest (Honorable Mention) Sponsored by: Brian Strand Date: 02/16/2020 Date written: 02/05/2020
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Rodrigues Avatar
February 5, 2020 at 2:29 PM
Sometimes that’s all it takes. I know of a faithful marriage many years in the making. He stepped out once and got the lady pregnant...goodbye, Charlie!
Ibeh Avatar
February 5, 2020 at 2:33 PM
Yeah, that's a pretty hard one to forgive!..lol Thanks for the comments and visit, Kim:-)
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