Unforgiven

Im fifteen years old
Everything seems so cold
I see no one else
I dont think god helps
My girlfrend left me
right after i gave her the key to my heart
I wasent that smart enough to realize
My pain cant be imphazied
even if you try to anaylze
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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February 15, 2011 at 3:53 PM
Your poem is deep and touching; I can definitely relate to this.
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February 15, 2011 at 9:05 AM
deep write Dylan,..p.d.
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