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Unforgiven

Im fifteen years old Everything seems so cold I see no one else I dont think god helps My girlfrend left me right after i gave her the key to my heart I wasent that smart enough to realize My pain cant be imphazied even if you try to anaylze

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/15/2011 3:53:00 PM
Your poem is deep and touching; I can definitely relate to this.
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Date: 2/15/2011 9:05:00 AM
deep write Dylan,..p.d.
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