Unforgivable

UNFORGIVABLE

Hey Joseph May my dear Souper and poet,
I’d pressed the send button before I saw it.
Three special friends I left out,
Please believe me Caren, Regina without any doubt,
Just an absentminded, dreamy poet, you must know it.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Thomas Avatar
December 12, 2020 at 5:10 PM
Lol Caren has a kind heart and Regina seems like a sweetheart. We all miss things from time to time. Hopefully anyone you missed wouldn't take it personally. ;°)
Proxenos Avatar
December 13, 2020 at 4:26 AM
Yes you are quite right, but I felt guilty and know they didn't take it personally, but c'est la vie, that's me. Thank you for reading my poems, so sweet. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Horne Avatar
September 16, 2020 at 11:24 AM
a very sweet apology! Hope you're keeping well, my friend x
Proxenos Avatar
December 13, 2020 at 4:23 AM
Hi Jack, a reply to say thank your for a sweet comment and to hope you are keeping well also. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Kiser Avatar
August 13, 2020 at 4:37 PM
Everybody has pressed the wrong key at the wrong time. You're the first I've seen apologize for it. Well penned apology.
Proxenos Avatar
August 15, 2020 at 7:43 AM
Thanks MLK - I needed to put it in poem form but I have left out so many, that I don't think I will do this again because EVERYONE is special and my friend on soup. Thank-you MLK, Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.
Horne Avatar
August 9, 2020 at 3:55 AM
a sweet apology for a very easy mistake to make & I'm sure they understood x
Proxenos Avatar
August 15, 2020 at 7:40 AM
Oh Jack, what an awesome person you are, here you are commenting , when I so regretfully left some very important friends out. Blessings my dear friend and hugs, Jennifer.
Romios Avatar
August 5, 2020 at 3:02 AM
Nice of you to do this. But with 30,000 poets here...impossible to get all. I understand sensitive feelings, though.I only have written about three people here. It doesn't mean, for punishment, I nor you should every poet. Suggestion.,Write another Alpha to Omega II?No, don't. Then more people will demand recognition. You owe nothing to anyone. Sister Panagiota. This is the hassle with personal name use,
Proxenos Avatar
August 15, 2020 at 7:38 AM
Hi Dear Pangie, you must know the Greek heart, it wants to encompass all, but we are only human and cannot reach the impossible. Blessings and hugs my dear friend, thank-you for a lovely comment.
Wolf Avatar
August 3, 2020 at 4:12 PM
You left out Caren, as well as Regina and Joseph?! Oh-oh. She might sic Trixie on you! Or maybe one of her razzle-dazzle raccoons. Or even one of her woodland faeries. Oh, Jennifer. I'd find the nearest bomb shelter if I were you. Then again, I'm not you, am I?!... Seriously, I'm sure you'll be forgiven! -- as soon as you write a poem about Caren, Joe, and Regina! lol. Thanks, gw
Proxenos Avatar
August 4, 2020 at 10:42 AM
Hi Gershon - I had a good laugh any of those fates would be very uncomfortable. However both Caren and Regina know it was an oops! Concerned about Joseph, I hope with all my heart that he did not get hurt because Unforgivable is for Joseph and the two ladies. Blessings, and hugs, Jennifer.
Raven Avatar
August 3, 2020 at 7:36 AM
Hi Jennifer, I can never get those |Limericks right. Another wonderful write. I am sure this Limerick shall be enjoyed by all who read it. Maybe one day i shall be able to write one, I doubt it though. Loved the content. Have a wonderful Monday. Hugs....Mike. XX
Proxenos Avatar
August 4, 2020 at 7:37 AM
If you can write the poetry the way you do which is breathtaking, then a limerick is nothing, don't take my example but maybe Jan's or Toms. Thank you for an excellent comment. God Bless, Jennifer.
One Avatar
August 1, 2020 at 9:13 AM
It is difficult to include everyone in a poem, which was a brilliant poem...
Proxenos Avatar
August 4, 2020 at 7:34 AM
Silent One - thank you - I just couldn't remember everyone's names. Thank you four brilliant comment! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Michael Avatar
August 1, 2020 at 6:33 AM
All your love is written on the hearts of those you care about and they know it...a few more twinkles from your star, would make it a little more forgivable...but nice one
Proxenos Avatar
August 4, 2020 at 7:31 AM
Thank-you Arturo for your kind words, but I can only hope that they have forgiven me. A few lines were dedicated to all. Hugs and blessings Jennifer.
Y. Avatar
July 31, 2020 at 3:10 AM
Hi Jenny, I really enjoyed your limerick. I’m sure Joseph, Caren and Regina enjoyed it too. Have a wonderful day my friend:-) Alexis
Proxenos Avatar
August 4, 2020 at 7:29 AM
Hi Alexis I thin Regina and Caren are OK but my friend Joseph I think I have hurt and that makes me sad! Thank you for a great comment dear Alexis, stay safe, Blessings, and hugs, Jennifer
Ball Avatar
July 30, 2020 at 8:26 AM
Cute and sweet Jennifer. Not unforgivable, just a little mistake. God Bless, JB
Proxenos Avatar
August 4, 2020 at 7:26 AM
Thanks Judy, you have made me feel better - I just couldn't remember everyone so a few lines are dedicated to all! You are an angel! Blessings and hugs Jennifer
Devonshire Avatar
July 29, 2020 at 2:39 PM
This is really cute, Jennifer. True friends will always forgive absentmindedness. Hugs, Carolyn
Devonshire Avatar
August 6, 2020 at 2:30 PM
No, I'll have to check it out now!
Proxenos Avatar
July 30, 2020 at 2:53 AM
Hi Carolyn, Hope you saw you are in the Alpha to Omega poem my friend. Thank you for a sweet comment - a true, sincere poetess who I respect and admire, and love to bits. Blessings, Jennifer.
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July 29, 2020 at 10:44 AM
- They're all in your heart, my dear friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Proxenos Avatar
July 30, 2020 at 2:54 AM
As you are my dearest soul-sister! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Mcintosh Avatar
July 29, 2020 at 8:25 AM
So cool. Thank you, sweet friend. Hugs and love
Proxenos Avatar
July 30, 2020 at 2:55 AM
Regina, I love the content of your poems, your thoughtfulness that goes into them, and part of your soul. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.
Kendrick Avatar
July 28, 2020 at 5:06 PM
I guess you wrote a poem about some poets. We seem to forget sometimes those that are important in helping us grow as a poet. Enjoyed reading your work. Thanks for dropping by my page. Sara
Koplin Avatar
July 28, 2020 at 2:44 PM
Great word play
Proxenos Avatar
July 31, 2020 at 6:28 AM
Tx. Mark. Be well. Blessings Jenn .
Cunningham Avatar
July 28, 2020 at 11:02 AM
You've tied up all the loose ends Jennifer, haven't seen Joseph on here for a while though. Tom
Proxenos Avatar
July 31, 2020 at 6:26 AM
Hi Tom, I hope he is OK! Yes I thinks so too now. Blessings, Jennifer.
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July 28, 2020 at 9:56 AM
Hello Jennifer I think you have done everyone now. Enjoy your day my friend. Hugs
Proxenos Avatar
July 31, 2020 at 6:25 AM
Hi Darlene, my friend that are not mentioned by name are definitely part of lines E,F,G,I and O. Enjoy your weekend dear Darlene. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.
Krutsinger Avatar
July 28, 2020 at 9:38 AM
Hey! You included me in this one! I love this!
Proxenos Avatar
July 31, 2020 at 6:21 AM
Thank you for commenting Caren and glad I made another special poet happy. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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