Unforgettable Paradise

Life is so different in the islands

Slow moving beauty beyond just the earth

Wailing  waves climb like a roller coaster, pleading for surfers

On the North Shore, time is irrelevant



Love is easy on Turtle Bay…Now that he is gone

My heart feels a quick stab and I remember all

We sat together on the beach, thinking perfection

Sighing as I reminiscence, I long for the cool, ocean wind



Nothing compares with the enormity of the whale

Its splendorous magnificence weaves through my memory

The humpback propels its body out of the water—words fail

Tears stream and we kiss, feeling complete



Holding hands beach walking at sunset

A green sea turtle disturbs the panorama

Slowly returning to the sea after laying her eggs

Red, yellow, blue fish nibble on my toes---



Dolphins playfully  nudge our boat

Pleading for attention—I touch its nose

It swims backwards making squeaking noises

I want to plunge and whirl with them.



Vividly, I remember standing on Waikiki

The vista of the infamous Diamond Head,

Its pointy peak formed by volcanic tuff

Climbing to its summit, God’s precision fulfills



Loving, walking, sharing—this day was our beginning

He stoops, picks a red flower, placing in my hair

Love blooms and I never want to leave paradise.

A beautiful woman places a lei over my head--nirvana

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 2/25/2017 2:13:00 PM
Hello Carol, nice to meet you. Where is this beautiful place in this poem? I want to go there. It sounds so beautiful to me. I enjoyed this poem.
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Date: 2/26/2017 7:59:00 AM
NOrth Shore of Oahu and the main part of Honolulu....it is a rare experience
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