Unforgettable

It
Was
Magic
Beautiful
Unforgettable !
The hills, the valley and the lake.

As
I
Looked up
To the peak :
Unattainable ?
The path was long, steep and rocky.

The
Sheer
Beauty
And colour :
Unbelievable !
Viewed from the top of Great Gable.

Smell
The
Freshness
Of the air :
Unsurpassable,
Pure and invigorating.

I
Hear
Nothing
Just silence :
Unfathomable –
The utter silence of deepest space.

As
I
Gaze down
The valley :
Unforgettable !
Red and gold of the setting sun.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Dietrich Avatar
November 24, 2016 at 6:15 PM
Not just unforgettable but very beautiful. I have felt this way looking down on my valley too!
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