Carrie Richards Poet Free verse

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Unforgettable

Pictures interred

deep into gray matter 

shatters delusion

except from time

no moorings holding them in place

to past or future

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6/12/15  For the "Through Your Eyes" Contest

(Requirement using 21 words)
Resubmitted for Brian Strand's Contest #221

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Andrea Dietrich June 15, 2015 at 4:03 PM carrie, there we are thinking the same again, but you took a different slant with this than I did. And you took to free verse! WE both used 21 words!! I love your taste!!