Besma Riabi Dziri Poet Sonnet

Unforgettable

I wonder, myself whom I venerate

the voice of my heart if loud fair enough!

the hive of my life I strive to relate

aspire to unleash my wonders, seems tough.

To craft a soul of light, creed of the core

the quest for mines of gems never shall end

the harsh thrusts I've learned not to deplore

for every stance there shall be a firm stand.

Pearly prints along your path, your voice carve

sound sounds are seized and unforgettable

medallions feeding souls to never starve

the bliss is a blessing increasable.

Sowing abiding beauty has no price

Unforgettable seeds reaped by the wise.


June 27th,  2018

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Jennifer Proxenos February 1, 2019 at 11:13 AM Hi dearest Besma, Went down your page and discovered this gem - your wondrous words and true talent never cease to amaze me. love and poetry hugs Your soul sister Jennifer Besma Riabi Dziri February 3, 2019 at 12:08 PM Unforgettable you are dearest Jennifer! You are always in my heart! You amaze me with your beauty and generosity! Bunches of hearty thanks for always being here spreading love and light. I'm deeply humbled by your sincere praising soul sister.. love, hugs and kisses. Blessings.

Robert Lindley September 4, 2018 at 7:11 PM I love this heartfelt and finely crafted poem my dear friend. The message and beauty in your depths of words both sing of truth that is needed. A fav.. Robert Lindley September 6, 2018 at 7:38 AM Words given that you and your fine poetic talents truly deserve my fine friend. May blessings shower you and yours.. Besma Riabi Dziri September 6, 2018 at 2:32 AM Thank you so much Robert for your sincere and generous feedback. Your words stem from a heart of a Sonneteer of high calibre.. I highly appreciate your visit and uplifting comment on my humble write. My honour and delight. My deepest regards. Stay blessed always.

Anne-Lise Andresen July 4, 2018 at 8:16 AM - Your beautiful thoughts flow so easily through your poem ... Beautiful and unforgettable, Besma :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Besma Riabi Dziri July 4, 2018 at 5:52 PM My pleasure dear Anne-Lise, Thank you so much for your genuine and generous comment.. a reward I do cherish! Stay safe and blessed.

Faraz Ajmal July 3, 2018 at 2:12 PM This is truly a superb poem and I enjoyed reading each and every line of it, the flow a d the rhythm, everything about this poem was perfect, good luck and have a really nice day Besma Riabi Dziri July 4, 2018 at 5:42 PM Thank you so much Faraz! A great delight to read your praising feedback! My pleasure! Stay safe and blessed.

Robert Lindley July 2, 2018 at 2:21 PM Wow! My friend this is truly an awesome sonnet! I myself am envious of its beauty, depth, message and poetic purity. A fav, a wondrous gem!! Besma Riabi Dziri July 3, 2018 at 4:33 AM Unforgettable are your kind and generous words you bestowed upon my humble work! Coming from you Robert! A Sonneteer of high calibre! It is an honour to receive such a feedback from you! Deeply humbled and elated.. Thank you so much Robert. Stay safe and blessed always.

Maria Williams July 1, 2018 at 8:39 PM Your blissful unforgettable Sonnet, beautifully expressed as always dear Besma, but I have to say this line in particular appealed to me the most...'To craft a soul of light, creed of the core"...Magnificent....Maria hugs and a fave Besma Riabi Dziri July 2, 2018 at 1:25 PM I'm very glad dear Maria you enjoyed and liked my humble write! It is always with a great pleasure I read your positive and uplifting comments.. that's my reward! Thank you so much dear Maria. Stay safe and blessed always.

Winged Warrior June 29, 2018 at 8:41 AM Very well expressed Besma...your sonnet is unforgettable...love & light...^WW^ Besma Riabi Dziri June 30, 2018 at 10:08 AM I always appreciate your visits and generous feedbacks! Thank you so much for your uplifting comment Winged Warrior! So much elated and honoured! Stay safe and blessed.

Yazmin Malik June 28, 2018 at 4:43 PM Sounds unforgettable <3 Besma Riabi Dziri June 30, 2018 at 10:03 AM My pleasure dear Yazmin! Hope so! Thank you so much for your lovely feedback! Stay blessed.

Silent One June 28, 2018 at 9:21 AM A deep personal sonnet to which you only have the answer.. I like the rhymes, even though some are slant rhymes... Your poems flows very well... Besma Riabi Dziri June 28, 2018 at 1:16 PM Thank you so much Silent One for your constructive comment. Always an honour to have you on my page.. Stay safe and blessed.

Demetrios Trifiatis June 28, 2018 at 8:09 AM Profound thoughts accompanying messages filled with divine beauty dearest, Besma! Besma Riabi Dziri June 28, 2018 at 1:18 PM A great delight to read your uplifting and rewarding feedback! Thank you so much dear Demetrios. Stay blessed always.

Lyric Man June 28, 2018 at 5:29 AM Besma.. I enjoyed reading your work this morning. You're a gifted writer! Besma Riabi Dziri June 28, 2018 at 1:23 PM I deeply appreciate your generous and praising comment Lyric Man.. Humbled and elated! Thank you so much.. Stay safe and blessed.

Vijay Pandit June 27, 2018 at 4:50 PM Unforgettable words..your sonnet is delightful Besma..so many great lines like..Sowing abiding beauty has no price Unforgettable seeds reaped by the wise. Well written, as always. Besma Riabi Dziri June 28, 2018 at 4:47 AM My pleasure dear Vijay! I always treasure your visits and genuine feedbacks! Deeply honoured and grateful.. Shine! Stay safe and blessed always.